i luv lxn its vry colz !!

that's luffy for you! if you messes with Luffy, the heaven's won't forgive you. haha. I like this fic.

Hahahaha! I love it! Please write another story! A longer one this time!! LUxNa FTW! lol

I really do not know how to describe how incredibly cute Luffy is.. ;D Nice work!

Ooh! There go the maps! Rule of thumb: (refer to the end of the fic lol!)

Of course Nami forgives him! Because she secretly lo-

BONK!

-Nami walks into the scene, looking down at the reviewer- "Should I have Zoro kill you?"

-shakes head- Uh-uh!

"...Good. Now, pay me 3,0,0 beris!"

WHAT!? I ain't made of berr- I mean money! -drops 1,500,0 beris and runs away- That's half, get the rest yourself, you cat!

haha lol XD
poor, poor nami

Was this in the manga? Or am I just imagining it? XD Coolness,

8.5/10

This story has been added to my C2 list!

(giggles hysterically) Kawaii everything! The plot, and especially the writing style!
well done!
^.^

XD LOL! ROFLMAO! I LUVED IT! L/N FOREVA!

JA NE!

~Chibi Amo

That was cute! I loved it!

Hee hee. that was funny! Please make more fics! Can you make a Luffy/Nami fic again except can it be more than one chappie ? Please! Sorry if I'm bothering you. Well, bye bye. I hope you make one. ^-^

You should make more One piece fanfics! 2 just isn't enough... Well anyway, I really like both of them, and I really REALLY hope you write more!

Oh, you are the mistress of short, perfect Luffy/Nami fics. Short is good, less time for character personalities to waver. Especially Luffy. I envy your ability to keep Luffy in character. That is DAMN hard. I also like the way you narrate. It fits the context and the personalities of the original characters so well! There are only a couple of grammer/spelling errors (i.e. 'catched' and 'papier') but those are easily fixed, and don't let them discourage you. Please, please, please please please keep writing these adorable interactions of my favorite couple. Because Luffy/Nami just makes too much sense, and there simply ISN'T ENOUGH. Thank you for your AWESOME contributions.

cute& funny tank u! lol
hope u write another 1 soon!

Hahhaha... this is so cute!! Yes, the Luffy-Nami interaction is so there. ButI'm more of a Zoro-Nami believer...
Hey sis, write one for me? Heehee... ^_~