I liked your description of the effect the Queen´s eyes, voice and smile had on Wolf. She used her weapons well.

Accor. to your summary, if I"m correct, their is a book for the 10th kingdom? Tell me if I'm correct please. I would very much like to read the book.

I love the discripsion (sp?) you gave on Wolf in the prision on how he was feeling I could actually feel his pain.

Hi!

I really enjoyed this fic, it is extremely well written, very emotive. Jeeze that's what my old english teacher used to say, but it's the truth, so what else can I say?

I think it's a great idea, taking the reader into what was going on in his head at this time, especially because some people -like my cousin- were, later on confuzled as to why such a good character would agree to serve her, but I always thought that was obvious! :) You've got the character of Wolf (erm, how to put it) spot on!

ow, got to go...I snuck onto the computer (I'm barred, my brother framed me!) and I can here my parents wakeing.

Just one chapter? What a shame.. I was really looking forward to reading the rest... please update soon... most fics out there are poorly writen but I really like yours so update soon ^^

*shivers* That was almost creepy. You captured how desperate and grateful and...Wolf-y he is! Great job!

Hey, I loved your story. You captured Wolf's character very well (so to speak, lol). You're a great writer, keep writing.

Tootles,
Widow Shark

PS: Check out my Tenth Kingdom Songfic, "Mirror, Mirror." And Keep Smiling : ).