This is awesome!

This is awesome so far! I can't wait to read more, unfortunately, I reek and am in need of a shower. lol. I'll be back to read more soon!

Hey, sorry, I'm soo far behind in all your chapters you updated fast! I'm not going to review every chapter any more because I'll run out of things to say, so...um...good job, and um...keep up the good work!

Awesome, you continue to amuse me! lol. Always at the seat of my chair. I was always the slow reader but in this story, I'm a speed reader!

Hey, sorry it took me so long to review! I've been busy! Nice job though, keep up the good work!

Thank you so much for the great reviews, fanfiction fanatic! And thank you to the others! Chapter 24 is the real last chapter, and an Epilog is to follow, along with a load of Bonus Features!...thanks again!

can't wait...bye

please continue soon i can't wait...good luck

please continue soon i can't wait...wellgood luck and bye

please continue soon i can't wait...GOOD LUCK!!

du du dun...i can't wait i'm really interested please continue soon...i can't wait...i will like it no matter how it turns out...i think...well good luck!!

Hi guys. I am typing chapter 16 right now. I will post it right when I am done...Thanks so much for the good reviews! Thanks for the compliments too! I will finish the story with 25 or more chapters,that is what I am planning...

please continue soon i can't wait...good luck, hurry up, and good bye

can't wait for the next part...please update soon...goodluck hurry up and goodbye!!

this is really good please continue soon...poor gabriel...that's gotta hurt. Anyways hurry up good luck and goodbye.