That was absolutely adorable, I'm still gushing :) You portrayed these characters so well. Especially Yuki, I find it difficult to get into his head, but you had the sarcastic moody yet begrudgingly in love Yuki down pat. Can't wait to read more of your work.

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! KAWAII! Love it! YAY! Me likes lots. I love how Shuichi thinks the same about smoke as Yuki. Loves it. Shuichi's a tiny bit OOC but its cute that Yuki rubbed off on him. Love it. Definate favs. Me go see what other stories you have.

This was so good... that I'm left speechless as to what to say. ^^; It doesn't help much, but know that I really liked this.

AW! that was so cute! really, really loved it. sweetness.

Nice metaphor with the smoke... and I think that Shuichi is more intelligent than people give him credit for... or not. (^^)

Anyways, I'm not a big fan of smoking myself, so I say, "Ganbatte Shuichi!"

AWESOME! yes yes, i am reading almost everything you wrote and reviewing... I have nothing to do or I don't feel like doing what I'm supposed to do. Liked the fic. Keep up the good work!

This story was hilarious! And undeniably cute- I think I like reading about slightly-less-stupid-than-usual shuichi

that was an enjoyable read, I love the way you presented the characters, very beautiful story

Loved it. I can totally see this happening. :)

The "infinity no tag backs" is too cute. XD I love Yuki and Shuichi's interaction in this fic. You managed to have Shu to be a sensitive, nice and easy-going type of guy without making him too much of a kid or making him wayy too imature like a lot of the other writers portrayed him to be. Thanks for keeping Shuichi in character.

You write beautifully and I am glad to have stumbled unto your author's profile. Will look forward to reading more of your fics. ^_^

I rather like it. I don't really know what to say, despite the fact that it was beautiful and artistic. Good job.

I LOVED this. Great job writing Eiri. I liked how you wrote his humor and romantic side. The guy is an author, so he does have a great imagination. Most people can't write him if he's not brooding about the past, but you did it well. Plus you mentioned Eiri in speedos, which rules. Wonderful look into his character and Shuichi's as well. It's neat how they both feel about smoke...shows their creative side and how much they do actually have in common even if they don't know it.

I loved this. It made me feel all warm and happy.

*smile*...there's nothing left to say...when in the face of great dismay.

so sweet *beams* cute cute cute. ^^ and original. and...well thought out. yesh. i dunno, just enjoyable to read. seeing someone do Yuki well is always enjoyable anyways.
keep it up! ^__^

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