Aw...that was cute. Kinda sad, but cute. Good job!

i think many know what i mean when i say 'aw!'

How cuuuuute! I love it. .

i really like it! very cool

I'm a diehard Yuffie and Vincent fan, so just the IDEA that Vincent and Yuffie are together makes me insane with my obsession to put them together. _ There are a few mistakes, such as not separating the character sentences into their own paragraphs. There are no spelling mistakes that I can see, and the words are descriptive.

I live for Y/V fics but your first one had YOAI (Which alot of the Vincent/Yuffie fics are starting to have) and your seconed one needs a sequal. But still you are a talented author and I'm just some idiot reviewer\Writer who sucks at writing

Really cute. I like Yuffie/Vincent fics. But...it's a little too short.