This needed a little more description and emotion.

Also Orc is spelled with a C not a K

I write slash from Lord of the Rings.

Please check out my stories if you will. I found your site on Gaia online.

I write Legolas/Aragorn.

Good story though

Lauren

Aw! CONTINUE WITH THIS! CONTINUE WITH THIS!

Aw.

That was a cute short fic of Frodo/Aragorn.

This is going on my favorite's list.

Good luck with getting more reviews for it.

I hope you can check out some of my own stories too.

Absoloutly brilliant! Ive recently become a fan of slash and this is wonderful not to slashy but very cute well done!

Jules