*sniffle* wahh! soo sad! its could of veen a bit mor dealtailed but very adorable but sad T-T

very well done... i've thought of writing

a fanfic like this, but never did.

good job!

very good! almost made me cry...

This is so sad, yet so very good. Grammar could use alittle work though. I liked this story, have you thought about cont. it, like what happens afterward with the boys and Goku...

This fic was so sad-and awesome! Personally, I do not like the fact that Chi-Chi died, but, people do grow old. Awesome job on this fic. I loved it. It was so sweet and original, too.

ok... the tears are rolling. That was excelent and it got to me! (partailly bc my nickname is ChiChi) my goodness! It takes a lot to get me to tear so u should be happy!

...Sugoi... this was sweet and depressing. I hope you write more. Gambate!

Whoa... the song fit so nicely... I really couldn't think of where I heard it, it was driving me crazy... then I read the end... YAHHH! B can read! Okay, anyway, kawaii story. Dun like it as much as Goku's Soulmate (By the way I'm going to smash the reviewers... I LOVED THAT!) Anyway, another cool fic, I'm actually beginning to like the song Sweetness Val -

omg that was so sad I think i'm going to cry...you know another good song for that would have been don't take the girl by Tim McGraw...but omg...*sniff* Son Mist

awwh THAT WAS SAD :( * OH TEAR* THAT WAS A GOOD STORY KEEP WRITING YOUR DOING GOOD

That was sooooooooooooooo sad! :: sniff, sniff :: Good fic, write more, more! Cerasi

WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! SOB! SNIFF! I HATE YOU! IT MADE ME CRY! I went through tissues like mad! *sniffs* Great job, keep writing. WWWWWWWAAAAHHHHH!

*sniff* This is such a great fic! It was such a tear jerker! It was so great and romantic and I just couldn't stop crying!

It's really good. I loved the way it expressed Goku's feelings, but it was sooooooo sad. I started to cry.

WAAAAHHHHH! WAAAAAAHHH! Excuse my maddness! This is going on my fav stories!