Reviews for Family Affairs

Reviews For: Family Affairs - Reviews: Page 1 of 10

J.C. 2007-12-09 ch 17, anon.	abuseSo, when do you take over the storyline for the Teen Titans Comic? Please say today.
batfan7 2007-11-20 ch 17,	abuseOoh! Neat story! Nice and complicated plot with heroes who aren't perfect - I'm glad I found it. I like how you've set up the whole thing - right now the heroes are a bit behind the bad-guy, but they're catching up and I have no doubt they'll start planning ahead of him soon... just as long as the whole 'know the future before it happens' thing doesn't get in the way. Now that they know how Harm got past all the security, hopefully they can plan on it and make sure it doesn't happen again. After all the running-scared stuff, it'd be nice to see them win one. And it sounds like the next battle will be in Gotham - that'd be the perfect place for Robin and crew to foil the Scarecrow's plans since Harm went and desecrated the Batcave. The relationships are interesting as well. I haven't read too many stories where Greta and Robin are together, but you've made them a realistic couple. The only minor quibble I have is Jack, Tim's dad. He seems a bit one-dimentional. He's stubbonly 'not getting it', which honestly seems a bit much. I can understand that the whole superhero world is far beyond his normal life, but I kind of feel that after being confronted with so much that he shouldn't get so extremely...confrontational/problematic, you know? You could still have him have issues with Tim, but it seems he should be a bit less antagonistic toward /everything/. Anyway, it's your story, so obviously you can do whatever you want. I'm certainly enjoying it! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving (assuming you're American)
Het Up 2007-11-10 ch 6,	abuseStrong chapter, with a nice heartstopping action sequence. The one real weak point, in my opinion, is Jack Drake. He's just a cartoon. When J. Jonah Jameson acts like this, it's supposed to be funny. The conflict is just too simplistic and too "isn't he wonderful?" on Tim's end. The Super-Cycle was a welcome YJ element, though, and the very convincing details of Robin's arsenal and slimmer costume read like Tom Clancy's Robin. Thumbs up.
Het Up 2007-11-07 ch 5,	abuseNow that's more like it. Less schmoop by the barrelload (not that I mind fluff... in small doses) and hagiography, more of the point being gotten to. And great villains... evil and just this side of uncomfortable to read, without overly posturing or kicking puppies because They Are Teh Evil. Good read.
Het Up 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseTim Drake left the building, and a few seconds later, Robin left the house. "It's a benevolent dictatorship." My two favorite lines, right there. A bit of an unusual structure -- I think I'd prefer just being thrown into the deep end and figuring things out on my own rather than hearing a bunch of characters reminiscing about the start of the AU -- it's like it's a step between showing and telling, with the characters telling us instead of showing us. Which isn't that much better, to me. But a compelling start to the plot with the story's hallmark coincidence (Batman and non-YJ co. being called off to deal with Darkseid) tying into the more immediate plot (?). Harm is a great, underused villain to appear here (since Pansy seems to be more married to the story at this point) and the notion of him pettily messing with Greta's dreams is a nice "DICK!/can Tim and Greta beat the hell out of this guy yet?" moment.
RobinofYJ 2007-10-02 ch 17,	abuseAs always, another great chapter. As good as the action is, I find the Drakes to be my favorite characters. Characterization FTW.
Cranston 2007-09-25 ch 17, anon.	abuseYou updated! thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou... Now that that's out of the way, I have to say that you continue to astound me with the depth of characterisation you include in this 'fic along with it's kick-** storyline. Bravo. I'd like to see more of the Gotham clan (Catwoman, Batgirl, Huntress etc.), to see how they're handling not just the country-wide offensive, but Robin's decision to un-mask the Titan's to thier respective families and how it might impinge on them. Then again, you might already have that planned, or it might not fit with what you do have planned. I almost feel sorry for Harm, p*ssing off the Titans (Robin and Secret especially) so bad, but when Starfire gets back he's gonna be a smudge on the sidewalk from her glare, let alone her starbolts! Great Job, great fic, keep it up. Please.
Rflame 2007-09-24 ch 17,	abuseNice update.
Protector of Canon2 2007-09-23 ch 17,	abuseI love this, but I can't help feeling like I've missed something. Or has Babs not reached the Fortress of Solitude yet?
Tressa 2007-09-02 ch 16,	abuseI can't believe I missed this chapter. Anyhow, on with the reivew. Once again, your attention to detail and dialogue has impressed me. I loved the whole issue with Greta. It was something that would eventually have to be brought to the forefront. And poor Dana is just still getting the lowdown on her step-sons very complicated life. I loved the balance here. With the tension riding throughout the entire chapter, there were still some lighthearted moments (thanks to Gar), some tearful moments, and brief moments of, well, I don't want to say happiness, but maybe moments that were not so stressful. I love the balance that you've presented. Again, everyone was in character. This story is coming along great! I've actually kind of fallen out of reading DC comics, but after reading this chapter has made me realize how much I acutally love it. Thanks and looking forward to more!
The Lady Bonny 2007-07-02 ch 16,	abuseDamn. That's really all I can say when I read a story like this. Damn. I have to admit that I do not know much about DC comics outside of Teen Titans (and even then, it's the older Titans I know the most about) but reading your story has made me fall in love with Tim, Greta, and the other former YJers. Bart is adorable and so much fun, and I wish we could have seen more of him as you write him in the comics. I love Tim and Greta's relationship and how important it is to the story; I'm a sucker for good romance (note my gushing about Gar and Raven below) that enhances a plotline. I don't think I've ever read such an intricate plot and although it's sometimes hard to follow (that is not any of your doing, though. It's simply my lack of comic and character knowledge), your story is always a pleasure to read. You have a great mixture of drama, action, and tradgey, and the darker moments really show just how hellish the situation is for Tim, Greta, and their friends and family. I really can't praise you enough for this fic. I also like emphasis you put on Tim's relationship with his family, especially the tension between him and Jack, because as much as I believe that Tim is an amazing hero, it's nice to see him as a teenager who struggles with his father as well. Dana is great; I love that she thinks of Tim as "her son in ever sense that mattered to her". I admire the fact that have not forgotten the older Titans and manage to focus on them as well. Most stories that encompass such a wide-ranging cast might simply keep them as minor characters but I'm so glad you haven't. And you included the relationship between Gar and Raven! I'm a fan of the couple so when I see someone write them as well and realistically as you do, it's certainly a treat. I do hope they manage to have that talk soon. You've got something very special here, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Really, you've got me on the edge of my seat so please update as soon as possible.
Susie 82 2007-06-04 ch 16,	abuseAnother wonderful set of chapters. I love learning the back history and reading it as people's reactions come across. I adore the protectiveness of Tim in regards to Greta, but more so I love that fact that Greta isn't necessarily allowing him to take on the role; she knows what has to be done and is willing to do that. I wonder if the two of them have ever sat down and chatted about how amost 75% of their actions are their attempt to right past wrongs... got to love that sense of responsibility. It was lovely to see the old Titans together and chatting about the on-goings. Raven's proposal to Vic was spot-on; if anyone should be feared for what they are capable of, heck, that should def. be Raven. But it is true what her and Gar said: the younger Titans, though watched after and cared for by the others, are not quite to the level of family that the older Titans are. There is a lot of trust being extended by all sides now which is the only way in which they will probably be able to survive. The fact that your story reads like a game of chess is captivating. It's like with ever chapter a piece is moved and one side will either have to attack of defend. Having YJ, Titan et al, finally on a bit of an offensive is great. Of course, that has me worried about what Harm and his gang will counter with. Great work as always. I look forward to seeing Oracle revealed as well as what Harm has been up to since the Good Guys (tm) re-grouped.
arg914 2007-06-03 ch 16,	abuseWow - two chapters in one weekend. So much for me getting my gardening done. As usual, fantastic work. Your depiction of Tim and Greta is deeply moving. I loved how Raven worked through Vic's feelings and look forward to her conversation with Gar. This is one of but a few stories I anxiously await the next chapter. Please don't stop without finishing. It would result in the villagers rioting with pitchforks and torches at your door and really, who wants that?
Texas Chigger 2007-06-03 ch 16,	abuseMan, the action just don't stop, do it? ;) Again, you've put forth an amazing chapter that I enjoyed greatly. I hate seeing poor Greta going through this, but at least she's got her friends (and Tim) there with her. Watching through Dana's eyes was also a nice way to go about it. I'm glad Gar and Raven got Vic straightened out, as well. We don't need complications there. ^_^ But what's Cissie's problem? I can't wait to see Babs come in person. She's always so much fun. :) I admire her for stepping up to the plate like that, what with her paranoia and all that. Still, this'll be quite a change in the superhero community, won't it? As far as I know, only the batclan and a select few close friends know her identity. Again, very well done - thanks a million for the quick update - and I hope to see more from you soon. :) God bless.
Protector of Canon2 2007-06-03 ch 16,	abuseWhoa... Babs is going masks off? Is she gonna tell them that she was Batgirl? Does Tim's dad know her? Too many questions! You must update!

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