messed up spelling and grammar.You should reread it and spelling plus grammar check it

just a tip i know this story is complete but for future reference i think the suffix chan is usually used towards girls and/or by small children so it seems kind of odd for a 20ish guy to call an even older male niichan. i think its usually niisan when the speaker is older than a child (i.e 15+). obviously im not an expert but i've read alot of manga and done some research and thats what i've found.

Very good story was captivated from start to finish.
Thanks

nice ending, it was quite unexpected. :D

oh i think i'm gonna enjoy this fic.

Well written, well worded, awesome plot and damn,

WHAT AN AWESOMELY AWESOME FREAKING AWESOME ENDING!

Yeah, that's about it.

in chapter 11 jiria was suprised to see naruto with the akatsuki, but in chapter 18 he said they found out he was with akatsuki 1 year after he left. WHAT'S THE DEAL WITH THAT?

The yondaime's name was Namikaze Minato, not this Kazami Arashi (which more than a few people have decided to use) Sorry for that being my first words in this review, it's just that name changes irritate me all too much.

Otherwise it was a brilliant fic, even though Naruto acted like a bloodlusting bastard most of the time. It was a nice twist of it; most people are afraid of killing off people in fear of facing the fans' wrath, but you killed off most of the most popular people (well, not most, all but Naruto). And I love stories where you kill off all the people! D: Soo...

Cheers and love,
ellesra

Sweet! i love it!

I believe that you yourself have summed up what I would say to you in your final author's note, so I won't make you reread crap years later.

This is the first fic that I have read in which not only Naruto joins Akatsuki but also it is complete. Congratulations for being years early. I wish I would have caught this earlier.

Thank you then, for bring this wonderful story to fruition.

This is one of the truely epic works on that is up there with Dame Wren's Two Halves and shadowmaster62's Never Cut Twice, two of my personal favorites. I must congratualate you on this work and encourage you to continue writing.

wow cool story poor leaf village

how old is miya?

Wow great story! It wasn't predictable at any point, well maybe thats because i read too many happy ending fics but a change in scenery can't hurt right. I will admit at one point say that i almost stopped reading because Naruto's, err evil, personality kind of took over him. But thats what makes this one of the better written stories i've read. There are always parts where you just hate but you want to find out what happens next. Anyways Nice job and i'm gonna see if you have any other stories posted ^^

I wonder why it isnt a book yet...it has enough skill...Just something the naked eye doesnt see :] i find great potential in you.(I may SOUND old but im really young...really,really young..)