Hm..interesting. Basing it on 'Stepford Wives', huh? I'm curious as to what role Sakura and Syaoran will play..Anyways, good start! Keep it up!

deity of death

Egads! That was freakin' awesome! I especially like how you did that entire thing when Saburo pointed the gun at Tomoyo. That was so cool!

This definetly deserves more reviews...I'm afraid I don't know how exactly to get to the top without updating...

Just update and see what happens.

-Frith

P.S. I'll get started on Chapter Three presently.