It's wonderful, it's outstanding, it's even better than Pat! I wish this website could have ten of this story XD

A little Neglected Mario Characters reference.

But seriously now, I like the story so far, good work on it. I wonder how long it'll take for Barret to come around about Cloud?

wow this is really, really good! ive only read the first chapter so far, but i already know im gonna love it! ive been looking for a novelisation of ffvii for, like, AGES, thank you SO much for finally writing a decent one! :D your the best EVER! I cant WAIT to read the rest, so I'll get to it! thank you (once again) for bothering to write this! :D:D:D

Way to go Cloud for sucking up your pride and dealing it like a man!

Or woman?

*shrugs*

LOL

If I was in his postion, I would be so pissed and so embarressed! That 'Don' guy is such a perve! *punches him* God, annoying!

OMG! This was the funniest part of the entire game!

I love it and this story was well made!

XD

What ever did happend to nhis arm?

I just wanna tell you that you are a goddess for doing this.

Let me begin by saying that I just discovered your novel and it has quickly become one of my must read. Your fast-paced writing style, (along with your clear love of the game XD) keeps the decade-old content fresh and, somehow, original. You understand what people want and manage to give back, ten-fold. It is my firm belief that you have the makings to be a novelist, unseen since Stephen King. I don't have enough good things to say! Two thumbs way, way up!

Another enjoyable chapter. Your writing isn't bad.

This is pretty good so far. I never played all of FF7, so I like that you're writing the story out.

havent played ff7 in a while but i think its train tracks not bridges that they cross.

Great Fanfic! It's like I am playing FF7! 5/5

I think you should SERIOUSLY consider sending this to Square Enix to see if they'll accept this as an official novelization, because it really is worth publishing.

Tremendous job. A worthy novelization of probably the best Final Fantasy game.

I loved it congrats it was perfect. Brilliant did everything i could have asked for

Incredible you really have captured the story and antics that made the game awesome.I myself am attempting to write my own version of this story and i was wondering if you had any tips of things that are better left out or moved to a new location, it would be very helpful to me.

You are a writing goddess! This is awesome! I haven't read it all yet, but I will! How do you find the time to write all this!? And with such detail!