er...not your best work. i like "he lives in you" a lot better.

wow... this was really good. i luved it! the best thing i read! i really like Nei... for the short amount of time i read about her. lol this was awesome! i luv ur writing!

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(just one Q... WHAT THE HELL IS PHANTASY STAR!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!??!!?!??!

that was so sad! I nearly cried! :( but great one shot!

Aw...that was so sweet and sad! I loved it, good job! *sniffle*

*tears stream down his cheeks* ;_; that was so sad *sniff,sniff* good but sad, just goes to show you that as we get older we lose the sense of reality that tells us the true meaning of our loved ones decsions. again good, yet so sad

I liked this story it was so sweet and sad! I loved brother relationship very sweet!

Interesting. Did you make up the Phantasy Star story yourself? It was very good. I enjoyed this story.

That was really sweet. I really don't know what else to say, just that it is so hard to let go of a loved one, and I think you did a good job portraying the innocent advice a three year old is capable of giving. Thanks.

Very interesting. I loved the tie-in with the Phantasy Star thingy, that made it very entertaining. So cute, I am a big fan of sappy stuff like this and I really liked it. Sometimes I don't think we give Goten any credit, even at three years ol he is very smart. And I bet he's really cute too...

-Yonk

o, I liked this! Very well writen. And the similarities between Goku's death and Nei's death were so subtle that they worked really well. It wasn't overly obvious, so Gohan finding the similarities really showed just how much he was hurting, and how much that day had been haunting him. Excellent job!

AWE! That made me cry! It was very good and i enjoyed it alot keep up the great work!

Gosh! I have to let you know that this story made me cry! It did! I love it though!! It's a really good fict. I wish there would be more to it, but then again it's just as good the way it is. Good job!! You kept me interested and that is hard to do! Really it is!! Well, your a great writer and I'll look for more of your ficts to read. Well.. yeah!