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Reviews For: Mayhem Squared - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

Ravens Domain
2005-12-08
ch 20,
abuseGREAT STORY! You have to make a sequel!
SamuraiGirl88
2005-11-18
ch 20,
abuseCOME ON!!
your not just going to leave it there! its a good story but i really did'nt like the part where Yumi tryed to hide from ulyich in the tree. sorry but i really did'nt like how that played out hey were getting so close!

the rest was great!
next chapter hope soon out!
Otritzi
2005-10-30
ch 20,
abuseSuch a cute ending...Nice X.A.N.A. attack, it seems like something he'd do in season 2
Fudge 1
2005-09-29
ch 20,
abuseAh, sweet ending. I knew Ulrich and Yumi would get together by the end. No one is cruel enough to keep them apart.
I'm looking forward to this sequel you're thinking abut. I hope there's more romance in it.
This is a very, very good story, by a very, very good writer... what else is there to say?
Fudge 1
2005-09-29
ch 17,
abuseARGH! DAMN Jeremie! How DARE he interrupt the kissing scene?! I'm v. annoyed with him. (Although I guess it's XANA's fault more than Einstein's... whatever).
Fudge 1
2005-09-29
ch 11,
abuse*gasp* EVIL! Sissi is so DEAD! I REFUSE to believe that Ulrich was part of the conspiracy. He's a good character. A little stupid at times, but still, I like him.
Fudge 1
2005-09-29
ch 4,
abuseEiliad bach, yn llawn strach,
Pwy all achub y byd?
Cyfle bod mewn by iawn,
ac un rhydd...

Sorry, sorry, but I just couldn't resist. It was the dramaticness of the moment. It's passed now. (The song is the Welsh theme tune to Cod Lyoko). I'm liking this story.
Fudge 1
2005-09-29
ch 1,
abuseDramatic... good start!
aliice
2005-07-28
ch 20,
abuseGAH! so god! thanks for all the reviews!
amai-chestnut
2005-04-07
ch 20,
abuseOh yay! that was g-r-e-a-t! I'm going to read the sequel thingy now! ciao now!
Lune-Solei
2005-02-21
ch 20,
abuseLOVED it...though you had me a bit worried there that Yumi and Ulrich wouldn't get together. Oh well, all turned out well. Keep up the good work, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Janika
2005-01-29
ch 20,
abuseThat was so romantic! And such a good story. I'm glad you submitted it. It had just the right amount of fighting and talking to make it interesting and captivating. I enjoyed the part where they got their powers the most.
Cor-Cor
2004-12-12
ch 20, anon.
abuseTHAT WAS GREAT!
Kidalana
2004-08-13
ch 20,
abuseOhh, more little boxes, oh, boxes! Like your story, How on Earth, Pluto, Vulcan and I guesse Lyoko too, did you come up with the block's colors being red, yellow, green and blue? Or mabey, I'll leave that crazy thought about the colors behind. Oh, Odd's color seems to be more of purple but, I'll be quiet now. Love the story.
G-Force 4
2004-08-11
ch 1,
abuseHey you might not know me, but you're fic was one of the reasons why I started my own series. The 1st person naritive is a unique twist that you brought to the fanfic community and I'm just here to congragulate you on a job well done. If your curious of my work then just search under my pen name to see what you've inspired me to write
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