Brilliant! :) I like it. Very well-written as well. And I can imagine Dawn and Cordelia getting together, and Cordelia seeing Dawn as the little sis she herself never had. That's pretty cool, in my opinion. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very brilliantly awesome and creative writing! :)

Wow, strangely weird but wonderfully written _

Tegan, you have to write more D/C fics! I will bribe you with LJ icons, challenges, and fics for your various sites. What do you say?

Sami

This is the first time i saw a dawn/Cordelia. Very nice.

CROSS

Now here's a relationship that Buffy would have objected to even more than Faith/Dawn.

It was cool how Dawn missed Cordelia so much that she started acting like her.

Can you imagine if Dawn had gone to LA to find Cordy? Buffy would have totally flipped.

Hell, she probably would have chased Dawn to LA to try to bring her back. Now *that* would be an entertaining scene to be witness to.

I can just see Cordy putting Buffy in her place with just a few well crafted verbal barbs.

Sick!

Cordelia/Dawn! This had a lot of potential!_

Update soon!

That is a nice beginning. I never heard of a Cordy/Dawn relationship. Update soon. I will be waiting.

That was good. No one ever really does Cordeila/Dawn stories of any kind. GOod to see that there are some out there