wow, I'm incredibly impressed. I didn't even know they had Seinfeld on this site and I really wasn't expecting anything special, but this was really good. It was funny and funny in the Seinfeld way. You got talent. I don't know if you're doing any more because it's a full episode, but I hope you do and I will definitly look forward to them.

This is exactly like an episode of Seinfeld. It was so funny. I laughed the whole way through it. I loved it. Good work.

Bravo ! Very well done , I laughed the whole way through!

My very first Seinfeld fic, and I must say, it was terrific! I absolutely love Seinfeld, and this was a great, very Seinfeld-ey fic ^^ This was a very funny fic that had me laughing and getting strange looks from my family, who then read it over my shoulder. My father liked it very much, being the Seinfeld-obsessed man he is, my mother isn't a huge Seinfeld fan, though she did like it, and my brother... well, he got lazy and told me to summarize, and I just told him to eventually read it alone ^^
Anyway, I loved the way everything tied together in the end, forming some sort of circle of confusion the way every actual Seinfeld episode is. Kramer was his usual insane self, having connections with everyone, it would seem. George is typically blowing everything out of proportion. Elaine somehow insults someone, and the person turns out to be someone important. And Jerry has some suspicion of his new girlfriend.
The opening act at the beginning is just like the opening scene of any Seinfeld show, and quite funny as well. It touches on something that has something to do with the show (if vaguely, in some episodes).
Well, that's all that I really have to say about this fanfic for now. Thanks for your time, and keep up the great work!

Excellent. I love Seinfeld and this script was almost as good as The Soup Nazi, The Cigar Store Indian, and The Opposite (my personal three favorites). Keep up the great writing. Maybe they'll bring the show back someday and you can submit this as an idea.

I was very impressed by this script. Not perfect but very funny

The two lines at the end of Scene D and the joke about the cop becoming pope were priceless... Really very funny. I can't quite imagine Kramer doing this dance thing but it was funny all the same. That's what's so great about fan fiction, you can get the character to do anything, no matter how crazy.

The script had very good interplay. I like when the little stories from each scene mesh well like that.

Nice work!

really good

this was excellent,i actually laughed out loud,usually when i read the fanfictions i'll just think something is funny,not laugh.this was excellent.too bad seinfelds cancelled because if i were you i'd send this to NBC.

This is excellent work. I think you captured their characters very acuratley. It had really felt like i was reading a script of the show. This is the first fanfic I have read out of Inuyasha and this was the one to start with.

Very well done! How this story was written out was very well done, and the story was fit to accually be in a Seinfeld episode. Had a great feel of a real episode too. You should write more of these.

*flips off the tv* A very good "episode" of Seinfeld. Good job.

This sienfeld fanfic is incredible! My mom started reading over my shoulder, and she was suprised when I told her it was fanfiction. She thought i was really reading a sienfeld script!

What can I say? You are a genius. This felt exactly like reading a transcript of the show. I think we'd all be a little disappointed if no one in England talked like a loveable street urchin, don't you?

The "sweating out" scene felt like it was based on the mousetrap scene in Hamlet. I'm a Shakespeare nut, so I liked that!

Cheerio and keep up the good work!

Please guys. Stop reviewing your own work. I'm a professional writer and, no ill-will intended, but the accolades these fics are getting just don't equate. When you say that "You should write for Seinfeld," or "This is just like a REAL Seinfeld," you're making a very strong statement. That's basically like saying, you hit 450 foot HRs, you should be in the MLB. Or you've got a 110 mph slap-shot. Sign up with the Kings. Lets just stick with "nice work, keep it up."

ONe of my faveorite storys. It was like reading a Seinfeld transcript! Other than that Jerrys stand-up was also just like him. It was the 1st fanfic I read and maybe the best! Keep it up!

Alright. Here's the problem: The Charles Bronson affirmation was a big miss. And George has already been a tough guy, twice in fact. The thing about the suits from the morgue isn't quite believable. Kramer is supposed to be flaky, not morbid. And the milkman thing...seems an awful lot like Ramon the poolboy.
The big problem was that the sarcastic lines, the ones that were supposed to be funny, weren't. And I'm not sure you have a good grasp of Jerry's character. Try drawing ideas from more personal experience.