I'm with Agarwaen-Ohtar on this one, i have almost no idea what this is about, but so far its a good story; nonetheless, but it REALLY needs to be updated, keep it up

I'm with Agarwaen-Ohtar on this one, i have almost no idea what this is about, but so far its a good story; nonetheless, but it REALLY needs to be updated, keep it up

Well, as usual this is good.

Even though I do not have any idea what the fiction is actually about, it's got a good feel and I've been a sci-fi fan for some time.

The story, though short, is well written and I had a pretty good idea what it was about.

Once again I complement you and I'll hope to read more of your fic later! )