okay sweetie, you need to work on the sequel for this story... you know I loved it and I have been waiting on the sequel for a while now... but I know how school can get in the way, so I will continue to be patient. Hope to see you soon.

Love ya

TheDemonQueen

ok kri-chan you have made me come to a conclusion. i believe i will begin writing fanfic too. cuz i so wanted her to end up with Kurama. or Hiei. you know how i love my demons. not that i didnt like jake, but i love Hiei and Kurama. so if and when i start my fanfic i will let you know. oh and by the way where the hell is the muse you were gonna make for me. he better be hot. and it would be great if he had ears and a tail. *giggles* you know how i love my demons. espically fox demons. and fire demons. and dog demons. and wolf demons... need i go on. ok there were a few typos so you might wanna go back and reread it, but you know i loved it right luv ya ash

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I haha Love haha this haha fic haha the haha ending haha was haha hilarious haha! This is one of the GREATEST fics ever. I hope there's a sequel, if not WRITE ONE! That is not a request. I seriously was not expecting the ending, but that does explain why there was no fights during the fic, except for between them. I LOVE HIEI! Me is happy.

Ja ne

Too Halarious! Hope you make another or continue. _

Oh my gosh, that was hillarious! You have got to make a continuation story so that everyone else gets hooked up!

..SK

great chapter! pretty stubborn, now isn't she? i can't wait to read more!

lmao, wonderful _ and the ending definetly left room for interesting sequals _ try and keep me updated this time, k?

love and chocolate,

sam

WO0O0O0O0O0OO0O0! yay for sari being my favorite _ and hiei for not tying her up correctally and being so darn attractive _

don't get me wrong, i like Tonya and her little melodrama manage a tois, but common, sari has a better approach _

sam

O.O

ok, i was going to complain that you didn't make Tonya aggressive enough with jake and kurama, but uh.. never mind _

sam

(i love sari)

a ! you didn't send update thingies! now i have mondo-much catching up to do! ...woah, i just got this weird image of me with glasses, a pencil stuck behind my ears, and flying paper... hmm, maybe i should sleep instead of read.. naw!

sam

*giggles inanely* That was fun. I especially liked that you had two OC characters getting together, instead of pairing both girls with the detectives.

And Sari and Hiei were SO cute together! Fun!

I am just sad it is over. I will miss Sari and Tonya.

Crazy

Me: **sniff** I **sniff** want to **sniff, sniff** read more! **tear**

**snaps out of it** Oh wow. I hope that I...HIEI! **glares at Hiei**

Hiei: What do you want, Baka onna?

Me: You stupid, little, arrogant fire-fly! I am going to rip your head off and mount it on a plaque!

Hiei: What did I do? **evil smirk**

Me: You, little Fire-fly, used your jagan on me, and made me say stupid things and almost cry! I don't like crying, and if you try it again, you are so-ho going to die in the most slow and painful way that I can think of.

Kurama: **walks in the door** White Fanged Wolf, you recieved a cookie from CotA. Do you want it? **holds cookie up**

Me: COOKIE! **runs and grabs at it**

Kurama: I will only give it to you if you do the review...

Me: Cookie! **munches contentedly* CotA, you are a wonderful authoress, and I really love your stories. This one was a nice change, because it allowed for some comic relief that some of your other stories didn't offer. **takes another bite** Thank you for the cookie, and thank you the stories!

WAH! It's almost over already! I wanted it to last longer. *_* sob sob At least it was a good story. And I know what that's like. I had this really weird dream a few months back but I'm not sure how to make it into a fanfic or anything. If I do I'll e-mail it to you but most likely I'll just keep it for myself if I ever write it. Cya later!

aww...ok...(Damn Jake!-_-')anyhoo i really like this wait for the last chapter!so sad its gonna end!*tear*

love,

Sakura Miko Lee Setsu

tootles

Wow...I don't think that I know what is going to happen. At least I am fairly certain that I don't. I might subconciansily, but that Isn't the point...is it? Great, now I am lost and **sniff** I **sniff** wanna cookie! **sniff**

Um, right. I really loved the chapter, and the whole story so far, for that matter. I am a little bummed that it will be ending so soon, abut there really isn't anything that I can do except enjoy the chapters, huh? Oh well, I had fun while it lasted, and I really, really can't wait to see what some of those suprises you were talking about! I will see you tomorrow, and I hope that I can understand what is about to come...