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SoapAndTIW
2009-11-26 . chapter 10
I couldn't let reading this chapter go without a review.

I just wanted to compliment you on Rikku in this particular chapter. Describing her feelings about Gippal really struck a cord with me, because I was in that situation (minus the guy being an arch-nemesis :) Just one with LOTS of history lol). I really connected with her in this chapter, and I don't know if this was just a random act of lit. for you or if YOU'VE had this sort of experience too but I can say that it was VERY real and I applaud you for that :)

Plus, I love stories that don't take FOREVER to get to the relationship. Ones that DON'T are so refreshing :)

If you wrote this four years ago, I can't imagine how talented you've become now :D
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-06 . chapter 25
Aw I can't believe it over! I know it's the end, but there's still questions that are left unanswered. Like what happens w/ Rikku and Gippal's relation ship? So, there's this one really important question that's been going through my mind lately...are you going to make a sequel? O.O
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-06 . chapter 24
Aw that's so sad...
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-06 . chapter 22
Now I know you wont kill Rikku but it's still a really sad and scary ending to this chapter. I still like it though! ^_^
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-05 . chapter 21
Wow
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-05 . chapter 20
I only feel a little bad for Elhandra...
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-05 . chapter 19
I was actually right? Wow ^_^ Can't wait to read more!
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-05 . chapter 17
Wow- way to not listen to what Balaralai has to say. ^_^ great chappie!
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-04 . chapter 16
Can't wait to read more! ^_^
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-04 . chapter 13
O.O Nuh-uh...I bet that in actuality, the bad guy is Lreav. His sister may be involved as well, but I'm betting on Lreav. I bet he's the one that screwed with the recording too, or had something to do with it at least.
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-04 . chapter 12
WOW...this story is...AMAZING! Oh and please kill Elhandra, I really don't like her. ^_^
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-04 . chapter 11
interesting...I have this weird feeling about Lreav and Elhandra, it seems like they're hiding something. ^_^ Can't wait to read more!
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-03 . chapter 9
Can't wait to read more! I love this chapter!^_^
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-03 . chapter 6
^_^ Finally! The moment we've all been waiting for!
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-10-03 . chapter 3
Can't wait to read more! This story is great! ^_^
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