 SoapAndTIW 2009-11-26 . chapter 10I couldn't let reading this chapter go without a review.
I just wanted to compliment you on Rikku in this particular chapter. Describing her feelings about Gippal really struck a cord with me, because I was in that situation (minus the guy being an arch-nemesis :) Just one with LOTS of history lol). I really connected with her in this chapter, and I don't know if this was just a random act of lit. for you or if YOU'VE had this sort of experience too but I can say that it was VERY real and I applaud you for that :)
Plus, I love stories that don't take FOREVER to get to the relationship. Ones that DON'T are so refreshing :)
If you wrote this four years ago, I can't imagine how talented you've become now :D |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-06 . chapter 25Aw I can't believe it over! I know it's the end, but there's still questions that are left unanswered. Like what happens w/ Rikku and Gippal's relation ship? So, there's this one really important question that's been going through my mind lately...are you going to make a sequel? O.O |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-06 . chapter 24Aw that's so sad... |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-06 . chapter 22Now I know you wont kill Rikku but it's still a really sad and scary ending to this chapter. I still like it though! ^_^ |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-05 . chapter 21Wow |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-05 . chapter 20I only feel a little bad for Elhandra... |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-05 . chapter 19I was actually right? Wow ^_^ Can't wait to read more! |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-05 . chapter 17Wow- way to not listen to what Balaralai has to say. ^_^ great chappie! |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-04 . chapter 16Can't wait to read more! ^_^ |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-04 . chapter 13O.O Nuh-uh...I bet that in actuality, the bad guy is Lreav. His sister may be involved as well, but I'm betting on Lreav. I bet he's the one that screwed with the recording too, or had something to do with it at least. |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-04 . chapter 12WOW...this story is...AMAZING! Oh and please kill Elhandra, I really don't like her. ^_^ |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-04 . chapter 11interesting...I have this weird feeling about Lreav and Elhandra, it seems like they're hiding something. ^_^ Can't wait to read more! |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-03 . chapter 9Can't wait to read more! I love this chapter!^_^ |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-03 . chapter 6^_^ Finally! The moment we've all been waiting for! |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-10-03 . chapter 3Can't wait to read more! This story is great! ^_^ |