 Ukari-chan 2004-10-11 . chapter 11I really like the way your stroy is coming out! Please update soon! |
 StarJade 2004-09-12 . chapter 11Heyy! Remember the email you sent me!! Yup I'm checkin out your story! Now this story is not bad at all! You've got great description skills and a pretty interesting plot. A little punctuation and grammer could be used a bit more and also pacing the story out so that everything thatz suspenseful has more of an effect on the readers. the twist with yamato was very nicely done and also, writing ur summary on the summary box does attract readers a lot more. but other then that, this is a great story and keep goin!!
see ya latez,
~starjade~ |
 Lady Of The Bubbles 2004-08-04 . chapter 11this story is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter. is... |
 snaregirl 2004-08-02 . chapter 4 I luv ur story so far! i was laughing my a** off! |
 Angel Blufur 2004-07-25 . chapter 11 i love the story i hope the next chapter is going to be up reaslu sune :) |
 Kawaii Tenshi no Hikari 2004-07-23 . chapter 11Hi, it's me again! I don't know if you noticed, but the formating you had before for chapter one has gone down the drain and it's now just a big mass of words. You might want to change that... Anyway, nice chapter. When will you use the poem? I hope my comments helped. |
 LacyKatt08 2004-07-23 . chapter 11sry sakura...but poor poor sakura!...this is good cant wait for more! |
 heheangel kisses 2004-07-23 . chapter 11lol, go sakura! can't wait for next chapter! UPDATE SOON! |
 azn-kitties 2004-07-23 . chapter 11oo koolies! great chappie update |
 MiniSparky 2004-07-22 . chapter 11YAY! good job! update soon. can't wait to find out all about the confession! |
 Serenity's Blaim 2004-07-22 . chapter 11heehee YOur so evil you know? To do all those things to Sakura and the make her be so nice to everyone... How could anyone want to cheat on Sakura. And then act so fake. You got character Complex there. oh well I make no sense She should get her job back. Syaoran should take the blame a pursade him to give back her job! PLEASE! anyways I love your story Keep it up *HUgs*
Annie |
 chikichiki 2004-07-22 . chapter 11aw.. ^_^ how kawaii.. :D .. yamato is such a... ugh.. ^^; keep writing |
 XxWildflowerxX 2004-07-22 . chapter 11Oh, I can't wait until Sakura tells him. Update soon. Ja |
 heheangel kisses 2004-07-21 . chapter 10hm... yamato... maybe he could be the evil guy that caused sakura to be sad before... or maybe he could have been a really good friend that had a crush on her... OR maybe, he could just be an aquaintance... lol, can't wait to see who he REALLY is! UPDATE SOON! |
 Clear Star Light 2004-07-21 . chapter 10who is that person? oh no! |