wow.that was very clever,but really,really sad.i liked it.it sure explains alot.:)

I LOVED it! You're a terrific writer and its amazing how you tied everything together to explain the Warden's childhood. My fave part was when her father told them their names. Mary-Lou. That was so cool. And, um, I'm rambling. Hehe, well, I just wanted to say it was one of THE best Holes fics I have ever read, and you deserve a trophy! Whoot! =)
--MSQ.

wow. it's a great story. i really enjoyed reading it. write another one! i can't wait.

Amazing! Wonderful, descrptive...amazing!!
You know, its funny how horrible-good-for-nothing-mary-sue-fics get tons upon tons of reviews, yet a wonderfully written fic doesn't acquire as much as the others...whats wrong with people these days?!!
Anyway,
wonderful ending to your fic, I loved how you used Mary and Lou for the girls names, I never thought of it that way, I always figured that it was Lou for Louise or something...
I really do hope you write another great Holes fic sometime soon, I'll be waiting
Until Then...

~Nilah

That has to be one of the best fanfic around. Is Sir Lizardkiler meant to be my sir? there aren't much things about the warden it was really good!

Ooh...
Is sirlizardkiller Mr. Sir?

I was wondering what you were going to do with Mary... now that she has a name...

Let's guess who Sir Lizardkiller is...
**COUGH** Mr. Sir! **COUGH**

woah... weird. O_O

Another great fic! Your writing style is amazing and your ideas original. I'm surprised you don't have a TON of reviews.
Keep up the wonderful writing and update soon!

~Nilah

O_O
oh...
What's with the chocolate?