I really liked how you had this in the first-person perspective. Excellent job!

X Ever Yours, Lauren Nicole

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To translate that into something remotely resembling /coherent/ thought:

Wow. That was written beautifully, the images were spectacular, and the ending was fantastically haunting. I am in awe.

Oh. very dark tone. Great job with this. I don't like the idea of the T/G romance but otherwise- great fic. xD

-paradox

Well! Not a big Tom/anyone shipper, I confess, but this was so rich and dark and violent, how can I not love it? I've been looking for a fic like this for ages. You're a very talented writer; your Tom is wonderfully chilling. I loved this: "she'd scream as I ravaged her, scream to the higher powers or to her mother or to me - "
I've seen lots of speculation on whether the violation of Ginny was literal or metaphorical; generally I go for the metaphorical side, but this is very convincing.
Great work. :)

Amazingly well done, perfect tone and word usage. I loved Tom admiring his new hands and "she'd taste of autumn and tears and blood" is a fantastic line. I loved this fic.

very, very chillful. i love this! i just recently became a tom/ginny shipper, but you make it more of a great ship! i hope there's more!

OOh.. chilling, and beautiful. A mastery.

I adore it.

END? You aren't going to finish it? Oh please, I want more! I'm slowly but surely becoming a Tom/Ginny shipper. I loved this piece of work. Well, perhaps it would be best left at where it is, but if you do get a plot bunny, please continue! Cheers and happy writing :)

That was cool! Really, I liked it! You might even consider going on with it. You know? Continue? Just a suggestion. *looks around* Sorry, I don't have any flames to light the fire with. I liked it too much.

Wonderful story! I'm a big T/G fan. Nice detail, describing Tom's desire.

oh... good story.

Wonderful writing! And I'm bad at writing constructive reviews; I'll leave it at that. )

i love this. it gives voice to some evil little thoughts i've had about ginny and tom riddle. short and sweet. just adding it to my favorites...

brillant!

Deliciously dark!