I like it..It wasn't crap. I hope you do more Shoujo-Ai fics..

A touching and enjoyable read. I like the way you wrote Shizuka's pov and her general personality. I also liked the way Ishizu walked in on the scene, making me hope for one moment that Mai *had* woken up, before realizing that, of course, that was impossible. -; A sweet fic, despite the not-yet-happy ending.

SHOJO-AI SUX! Saw that one coming...U MECHANICAL MONKEY! Typical of Anzu to have a Sleeping Beauty thing...

GAH the story is reallie fabulous. i love it. it makes my writings look like crap. now that i read youre story, im gonna make sweet love to shuechi shindou.

... thats the first shoujo-ai fic I've read, and it was quite good too!

So is it going to be a continuation?

Hehe, your problem is the same as me... I have m-a-j-o-r diffifculties writing one-shots... I just finished posting up my first one.

Anyway, I hope you consider a continuation!

Ja!

Millennium

splendid! very well done! please do continue this ficcy!