 Red-Chan 2004-06-26 . chapter 1It was a very good first chapter, even though it was really short I liked it alot. It had a lot of emotion and it drew me in quickly. I would love to see what happens next. And I hope that Draco doesn't really get the Dark Mark. Oh and I do hope Ol' Voldipants dies a horrible death.
But besides that... Uh, you should read my story about snape and harry, that is if your into that couple. Its a good story, or at least I think so. Uh... keep up the good work and update soon! |