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nuitDesFees
2009-05-04 . chapter 1
Thanks for this :-) Luna's one of my favourite HP characters, and this is precisely why. She listens to the harmony of the spheres!
majorgoth
2008-02-01 . chapter 1
this is nice...very well done...
understandable...
how did you came up with this idea?
really nice...
Rose Slytherclaw
2007-03-17 . chapter 1
Wow ... that's really deep. It made me think.
Bagge
2007-01-16 . chapter 1
What a wonderful insight in the mind of Luna Lovegood. Everything is the way it is, and she alone understands it. And you kept all the warmth and playfullness that is her. Well done!
Alpha Draconis1
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
Beauty indeed.
MissGillyweed
2005-06-10 . chapter 1
What more can I say? It is simply beautifull. I think that sums it up in one word. beautiful
Mari Grem
2005-01-05 . chapter 1
She could, couldn't she? That would prove to be interesting.
-Cole
thrnbrooke
2004-07-26 . chapter 1
I like Luna's way of thinking. Everyone flocked to her. Harry Potter, the Slytherins... everyone. Too bad she couldn't have gotten Voldemort too.
Luna-sempai
2004-07-19 . chapter 1
This is the most accurate summing up of Luna I've ever seen. I would be proud to call myself similar to Luna. She (and you) have seen the truth. Thank you for expressing it so eloquently.
Melted-icicle
2004-06-27 . chapter 1
You are Luna Lovegood. Perfect.
The Toaster Team
2004-06-27 . chapter 1
Very interesting take on Luna's character. This is the first time I've ever seen her under such an angle, it would explain a lot.

Your vocabulary is exquisite, "their coexistence silent except for the soft plunk of flat chunks of the lithosphere gliding smoothly over the water" I especially love the way you put this. You also have either no or a minimum of ( since I didn't spot any) spelling mistakes. The story also has a certain flow to it, a serene, balanced sort of feeling, much like the Luna Lovegood you're trying to portray. Very well done.

I wish there were more fics such as this one in this section.

I rate this fic 5 toast. And if you're wondering: it's a good rating, I would put an even higher one but 5 is the maximum I ever give to one shots--I believe longer fics are more difficult to write. All in all: good work!

~Yours sincerely
~Waffle of The Toaster Team
sharksteeth
2004-06-26 . chapter 1
That was amazing... truly beautiful. Your words and ideas flow just right and you've really got Luna down! One of the best Luna stories I've read; it really is great. You went into detail and yet strayed from it -- perfect combination of it, I think.

Fantastic job, I really love this.
Corrupted Purity
2004-06-24 . chapter 1
Absolutely lovely. It was simple. Not like other stories where they try to make Luna sound really complicated, but it was simple. That's what I love about it.
ParvisSira
2004-06-24 . chapter 1
I throughly enjoyed your characterization of Luna. I love the way you portray her, and the way people around her interact with her. Her interaction with the world, it's all so wonderful.
faelyn
2004-06-23 . chapter 1
This was really quite lovely. A nice, simple story. You went with introspection, and though it doesn't always work, it did here. Dreamy and elegent, it suits Luna. Well done.
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