 nuitDesFees 2009-05-04 . chapter 1Thanks for this :-) Luna's one of my favourite HP characters, and this is precisely why. She listens to the harmony of the spheres! |
 majorgoth 2008-02-01 . chapter 1this is nice...very well done...
understandable...
how did you came up with this idea?
really nice... |
 Rose Slytherclaw 2007-03-17 . chapter 1Wow ... that's really deep. It made me think. |
 Bagge 2007-01-16 . chapter 1What a wonderful insight in the mind of Luna Lovegood. Everything is the way it is, and she alone understands it. And you kept all the warmth and playfullness that is her. Well done! |
 Alpha Draconis1 2005-07-27 . chapter 1Beauty indeed. |
 MissGillyweed 2005-06-10 . chapter 1What more can I say? It is simply beautifull. I think that sums it up in one word. beautiful |
 Mari Grem 2005-01-05 . chapter 1She could, couldn't she? That would prove to be interesting.
-Cole |
 thrnbrooke 2004-07-26 . chapter 1 I like Luna's way of thinking. Everyone flocked to her. Harry Potter, the Slytherins... everyone. Too bad she couldn't have gotten Voldemort too. |
 Luna-sempai 2004-07-19 . chapter 1This is the most accurate summing up of Luna I've ever seen. I would be proud to call myself similar to Luna. She (and you) have seen the truth. Thank you for expressing it so eloquently. |
 Melted-icicle 2004-06-27 . chapter 1You are Luna Lovegood. Perfect. |
 The Toaster Team 2004-06-27 . chapter 1Very interesting take on Luna's character. This is the first time I've ever seen her under such an angle, it would explain a lot.
Your vocabulary is exquisite, "their coexistence silent except for the soft plunk of flat chunks of the lithosphere gliding smoothly over the water" I especially love the way you put this. You also have either no or a minimum of ( since I didn't spot any) spelling mistakes. The story also has a certain flow to it, a serene, balanced sort of feeling, much like the Luna Lovegood you're trying to portray. Very well done.
I wish there were more fics such as this one in this section.
I rate this fic 5 toast. And if you're wondering: it's a good rating, I would put an even higher one but 5 is the maximum I ever give to one shots--I believe longer fics are more difficult to write. All in all: good work!
~Yours sincerely
~Waffle of The Toaster Team |
 sharksteeth 2004-06-26 . chapter 1That was amazing... truly beautiful. Your words and ideas flow just right and you've really got Luna down! One of the best Luna stories I've read; it really is great. You went into detail and yet strayed from it -- perfect combination of it, I think.
Fantastic job, I really love this. |
 Corrupted Purity 2004-06-24 . chapter 1Absolutely lovely. It was simple. Not like other stories where they try to make Luna sound really complicated, but it was simple. That's what I love about it. |
 ParvisSira 2004-06-24 . chapter 1I throughly enjoyed your characterization of Luna. I love the way you portray her, and the way people around her interact with her. Her interaction with the world, it's all so wonderful. |
 faelyn 2004-06-23 . chapter 1 This was really quite lovely. A nice, simple story. You went with introspection, and though it doesn't always work, it did here. Dreamy and elegent, it suits Luna. Well done. |