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Reviews for: Elusive Innocence
sharnii
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
Another great one-shot. Hmm after reading so many of your Noir fanfics I think you it would be cool if you tried writing a longer one, with some plot development. Could be a cool writing challenge...I'd be interested to see how you'd handle it. XD PM me is you ever do this! O.O
Syaoran Li Clow
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
I guess isn’t necessary to said those three words to know that you love and you’re loved; especially when your actions can do that instead of any words. I always loved how they could express what they want to say without saying anything at all; everything is told by their actions. It was really a shame that we never saw them in the mood (or even a kiss just like Chikane & Himeko), but still they’d a good chemistry.

I’m happy today, I keep reading good stories one after another.
GasSnake
2004-09-06 . chapter 1
Wonderful work! So tensely erotic even without them having do all that much. Your portrayal of Kirika's thoughts and actions are dead on character to what I believe it would be once the relationship with Mireille deepens further. Do another one for a different situation but from Mireille's POV!
Mayo
2004-08-08 . chapter 1
This is my favorite one. ^_^
sakul
2004-06-26 . chapter 1
I knew the hook was in the moment I read 'you're such a girl'. Again you've brought a smile to 'my face'. Love is splendid especially in the bath. Your works are an easy read with strong hooks. Keep up the good work as you have a fan here...
JOlteus
2004-06-26 . chapter 1
Another masterpiece! Very good(like always). I know I can always count on you to write the best and sweetest Noir fanfics. Keep writing!
Neru
2004-06-26 . chapter 1
Again, a really nice fic! I like your Noir fanfiction, cuz it's just very good and warm. Anytime I read it, I'm conceived that after the ending everything went the best possible way.
The bathroom scene was...interesting. I want to read more!
dothackers
2004-06-25 . chapter 1
yeahh!! sugoii lee san ..thanks for all you noir fic.. i really like them all..you're my fave writer ^_^
the idea of mireille in a bathtub is somewhat sexy ^_~
aagghh i can't get enough mire>
Unwritten Letter
2004-06-25 . chapter 1
Let me be the first to review to this lovely little ficcy. I think I almost went insane through lack of Noir. Seriously. -melts- It was sweeter than candy, sweeter than cake, sweeter than ice cream...haha, well, you gte the point I hope. Truely, I loved it. And yet, I'm left wanting more...

More soon I hope,

|Ankh|
Shigan
2004-06-25 . chapter 1
Hmm... *Someone* has been reading doujisnhi lately...or? XD

Just as good as your other stuff, nicely paced writing and easy but on-the-point descriptions to set the atmosphere like usual. Even if I hadn't mind the bathroom scene to be little bit longer ^_^.

*Bad Shigan* XD
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