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Reviews For: Christmas Wrapping

Dodger Gilmore
2006-11-28
ch 1,
abuseReally like. More like love. Wonderful wonderful writing and story and everything. Basically wonderful.
papaslittlecj
2005-09-14
ch 1,
abusei love this story
its sweet that she met his grandmother but if its his fathers mother why would liz and christie be there jimmy and liz didnt really talk
i just got confused but i still loved it
anewhope
2005-05-29
ch 1,
abuse:-) I really liked the fluffiness/humor/ROMANCE (obviously). Usually with Literati fics it's drama and angst and tragedy and what have you. But this was really nice, and it was completely in character for both of them.
Billy Joel
2005-03-16
ch 1,
abuseRead it. really good. wow, so diffrent then they used to be. still the jess thing, but...
selina
2005-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it. I really like your writing style and how well you seem to know the characters, and be able to keep them in character. The conversations between Rory&Jess seemed so real and natural, I could see it all playing out in my head. Great story. You made me Lit heart soar with hope
Bubblan
2004-12-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseLIKE it!
someone5
2004-08-25
ch 1,
abuseJust noticed the sequel, so I figured I should check out this one first.

I don't know how I missed it before, but I absolutely loved it! I'm going to check out the new one right now!
Christie
2004-07-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww, E-F-W, that was so sweet :) I loved the summary. And the snowball fight. And Lena. And... *sigh*

You're wonderful.

And the naming of Christie after me. Aww! *hugs* I love you :) That made me feel so special - no one's done that for me before :)

And I'm highly anticipating the possible *wink wink* and the teasing *wink wink*.

If you understood that at all.

But, back to the subject, it was perfect. Just one thing...If this was all on Christmas, why didn't you wish yourself a happy birthday?
Arianna555
2004-06-26
ch 1,
abuseOmg, I can't believe it took me this long to read this. *gasp* What is wrong with me? =D

It's wonderful. I love it.

You have the characters so perfectly. The little details, the things they do, the...order you wrote/said things in here, as weird as that sounds. It works really well.

The eggnog analogy...that was so creative, so perfect. I loved all the metaphors, similies, analogies in here.

I *love* the kiss, how sudden it was.

And...it wasn't slutty at all. It was perfect.

The calling Lorelai. Jess. Meeting him in the grocery store!

I love Jess, and Lena, and Christie! Ah, she was so funny. Awesome. And Rory. I liked her in this fic. Even maybe a lot. Fics are making me like her again, I think. =D

There are so many lines I should quote here...

This is just so awesome. Such a cool idea. You need more reviews.

(Guess what! ff.net is showing the paragraph spaces in reviews now! lol)

Like you said what you say goes, now what I say goes. Hee.

So finally: this rocks.
cellardoor
2004-06-24
ch 1,
abuseWonderful little fic. I loved it, Christmas in June just seems to much more magical then Christmas in December. Anyways this was very lovely. I love everything Rory and Jess, and this was just perfect...

late.
--L
smile1
2004-06-24
ch 1,
abuseHey!

This was an excellent story and I enjoyed reading it. The interaction between Rory and Jess was so in character.

Bye, smile :-)
Knowhere
2004-06-24
ch 1,
abuseVery cute. Just what I needed when there's an extreme shortage of nice, light, Lits out there. Nicely done.
Caffeinated Ballerina
2004-06-24
ch 1,
abuseI loved it, Elizabeth! The banner is finally clickable. Haha. I loved the t-shirt thing.
lucial
2004-06-23
ch 1,
abuseI love it, this put me in a good mood i can't stop smiling.

You give my little Lit heart life :D
punkcatwitissues
2004-06-23
ch 1,
abuse'Idaho, no, udaho,' As I just told you, I want that shirt. LOL. Well, this fic did take forever, but I forgive you because it's great! (although I kinda wish you'd left the Mormon Church in there because I'm curious as to how you managed to have it in there). So... guess that means I should stop being a tease and start writing myself, huh?
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