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LUM
2009-02-21 . chapter 7
OMG what is wrong with you? and by that I mean UPDATE THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
LadyKagome of the north01
2009-01-05 . chapter 7
this story is really good i love it plz! update soon plz!plz!pz!
ObSeSsEd WiTh ROXAS
2008-12-25 . chapter 7
update please
:)
darkangel0212
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
keep up the good work on your story
Winter92
2008-12-13 . chapter 7
e what is going to happen now?!
Azera-v
2008-10-12 . chapter 7
Please update this story!
angela
2008-08-02 . chapter 7
Wow this is a interesting story so far. I wonder what is going to happen next? So far I feel like a worm on the end of the hook waiting to be dunked under water. Help I'm hanging here... LOL I love how this story was written. Its a novelity in its own right. I like the whole amnesia thing you got going with kagome. Its rich and a dream plagued demon lord is just the icing on the cake. I can't wait to see just what happens to the other characters later on. I will say that I liked on how you took the time to explain a few words that sounded strange. It shows a willingness to keep the story plot moving for the reader without them getting frustrated and giving up. I have come accross many stories that I have read but because there were no explainations on what certain words meant. I gave up on reading them simply cause I could not understand just what the word meant. I think that you have out done yourself by simply taking the time to explain what those words like (tenshi) meant. I appreciate that and I believe in all honesty that explaining the meaning behind certain words adds to the overall enjoyment of any great read. I hope that this might just give some much needed inspiration for you to continue.
MittknightDr
2008-07-17 . chapter 7
Well...

What you could do is make Kagome supposedly a kind of angel demon thing. And that she comes to her power as a demon under Sesshomaru.
THen what you could do is make her not remember anything, even though Naraku is trying to make her remember, since her demon powers aren't allowing it. After that, you could make Sesshomaru train Kagome while Inuyasha is trying to get to them.

And of course while Sesshomaru is training her they fall in love and Inuyasha burst in while they are kissing.

That's as far as I've got, but if you really like it, ask me for more!

Don't forget to update, please...
Tipix
2008-05-20 . chapter 7
WOW! that was amazing. i hope you'll find time to continue this one to. you're definitely going on my fav list. your stories are creative and well done. I can't wait to read the others
SOphiA
2007-12-20 . chapter 5
I LOVE UR STORY LOLOLOLOlOLOLOL
Wolf-Singer94
2007-11-24 . chapter 7
My god i love this story. . . . .
Update soon
Lurking-in-shadows
2007-03-07 . chapter 7
I liked this story, I feel kinda bad 4 poor Inu-chan but those are the brakes. I'm a big S/K fan girl so yeah. I even learned a new word from this story; nostalgia. I hope the hiatus is over soon because I really like this fanfic.~ Aly
Megan Consoer
2007-01-18 . chapter 7
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
orchid
2006-10-08 . chapter 7
please update update update
Mimi
2006-08-13 . chapter 7
This story is good too. -nods- Your stories always have me hooked.. So PLEASE finish this story. :3 I don't have any ideas how... (because I'm a reader of stories.. Not a writer. o.o;;) But try to find inspiration to finish! ^^ Good luck!
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