 marc 2009-08-18 . chapter 23 Very good well written story, like the power levels, very nice. |
 tornadoblake2009 2009-07-08 . chapter 6cool chapter |
 tornadoblake2009 2009-07-08 . chapter 4great chapter |
 tornadoblake2009 2009-07-08 . chapter 3hey great chapter |
 tornadoblake2009 2009-07-08 . chapter 2hey great chapter |
 tornadoblake2009 2009-07-08 . chapter 1hey great chapter |
 redchinese 2009-05-03 . chapter 6"no its not for sex!"
that was really rich
honest to god it was. you were right that you're story is a bit hard to get into at first, but i really am enjoying this, you're characterization of Bulman, Vegeta and Videl is so good, it feels very realistic. |
 Raffiki 2009-04-05 . chapter 17Epic. I love the idea of tv shows being part of alternate realities. :D |
 Wolfinson 2009-02-06 . chapter 23I know you're already on your 7th installment but as I read this one I'd like you to know that I found little to no errors. Congratulations. |
 DustBunnyQueen 2008-06-18 . chapter 5'Gay, albino bastard'...::falls over laughing:: oh THAT was a good one! It would've been freaking hilarious if you had added cross dressing and sex-change operations. Seriously, the guy wears lipstick and nailpolish and has a woman's voice. Can we say 'Gender issues'? I can only guess what he would have said to Cell. I get the feeling a RAID joke would have been uttered. keep up the good work with all your other stories! |
 MrEmperor 2007-03-15 . chapter 23I can't believe I'm reading this again, but the story is very good. I've read all of them, several times but this one ranks up there on my list. I only noticed a few typos in here, nothing major, just an ommitted word or two. Keep it up, and know that your early work is still really, really, good. In fact, it's inspired me to work on a DBZ fanfic too. Great job, keep up the good work! |
 chaosreaver 2007-03-10 . chapter 6dude, i think this is a really good story so far. its kept me wanting more. keep up the good work. |
 Deviate Fish 2007-01-17 . chapter 22He could survive a powerful slap from Cell, of course he should be at least 1500. |
 Deviate Fish 2007-01-17 . chapter 14Can blow up the planet, but can't beat this...? |
 Deviate Fish 2007-01-17 . chapter 4Whoa, wait. Normal humans = 5 PL, how are Bank Robbers 100?! |