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Reviews for: DBV Series 1: The UnNatural Saiyan - Page 1 of 3
marc
2009-08-18 . chapter 23
Very good well written story, like the power levels, very nice.
tornadoblake2009
2009-07-08 . chapter 6
cool chapter
tornadoblake2009
2009-07-08 . chapter 4
great chapter
tornadoblake2009
2009-07-08 . chapter 3
hey great chapter
tornadoblake2009
2009-07-08 . chapter 2
hey great chapter
tornadoblake2009
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
hey great chapter
redchinese
2009-05-03 . chapter 6
"no its not for sex!"
that was really rich
honest to god it was. you were right that you're story is a bit hard to get into at first, but i really am enjoying this, you're characterization of Bulman, Vegeta and Videl is so good, it feels very realistic.
Raffiki
2009-04-05 . chapter 17
Epic. I love the idea of tv shows being part of alternate realities. :D
Wolfinson
2009-02-06 . chapter 23
I know you're already on your 7th installment but as I read this one I'd like you to know that I found little to no errors. Congratulations.
DustBunnyQueen
2008-06-18 . chapter 5
'Gay, albino bastard'...::falls over laughing:: oh THAT was a good one! It would've been freaking hilarious if you had added cross dressing and sex-change operations. Seriously, the guy wears lipstick and nailpolish and has a woman's voice. Can we say 'Gender issues'? I can only guess what he would have said to Cell. I get the feeling a RAID joke would have been uttered. keep up the good work with all your other stories!
MrEmperor
2007-03-15 . chapter 23
I can't believe I'm reading this again, but the story is very good. I've read all of them, several times but this one ranks up there on my list. I only noticed a few typos in here, nothing major, just an ommitted word or two. Keep it up, and know that your early work is still really, really, good. In fact, it's inspired me to work on a DBZ fanfic too. Great job, keep up the good work!
chaosreaver
2007-03-10 . chapter 6
dude, i think this is a really good story so far. its kept me wanting more. keep up the good work.
Deviate Fish
2007-01-17 . chapter 22
He could survive a powerful slap from Cell, of course he should be at least 1500.
Deviate Fish
2007-01-17 . chapter 14
Can blow up the planet, but can't beat this...?
Deviate Fish
2007-01-17 . chapter 4
Whoa, wait. Normal humans = 5 PL, how are Bank Robbers 100?!
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