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Black Midnite
2009-12-12 . chapter 16
Wow. That was amazing! It is a very well written piece, has a great plot, and I wish I could write half as well. Good job.
A maze thing
2009-08-28 . chapter 16
This story was amazing! It was extremely well written, and I liked how worried everyone was for Tony, while he wanted to make sure that Kim was okay. Even though she'd done all those bad things, Tony still wasn't totally malicious towards her. I really liked the ending, especially the last scene. It definitely made the story complete and I think it shows a lot about Kim and Tony. Great story! I loved it!
isabellapurri
2009-08-10 . chapter 16
amazing fic!
couldn't stop reading it for a second!
=D
hugs, bella
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha
2009-04-09 . chapter 10
roflmao
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha
2009-04-09 . chapter 2
I'm pretty scaredd for our dear poor Tony
But Kimberly was frickin' hilarious!
I can't can't stop lauhging at her psychotic-ness
lmao
I so love this fic
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
i'd probably faint if Tony flirted with me
he's so...Tony
lol
Azamiko
2009-04-07 . chapter 16
Good story.
XX-Samantha-XX
2009-03-23 . chapter 16
i quite like this story, its different. good story :)
krage
2009-02-10 . chapter 16
I seem to be making my way through your stories. Your interpretation of the charaters is just so spot on its like watching the show. I love the little bits of humour that you make sure you add in like Kate's little mistake at the end. I also particulary loved this story because of the excellent portrayal of the 'bad guy' you could really understand why did what she did, and though she made some bad choices the way you showed her feelings you could still see where she was coming from. As you say there are bad guys of all kinds, with diagnoses or without.

Although it escalated out of normal human behaviour, I loved how relatable you wrote her charater when we first got to know her. Although it had her tendencies in there, the way it was based in things we've all felt like shyness around someone you like. It made her feel like a real person that you just had to feel some pity for even as the story progressed.

Saved to favourites of course.
NickTonyK
2009-01-18 . chapter 16
Excellent story! I really enjoyed it, and I hope that you'll come back to writing good Tony stories!! Take care!
Taura Callisto
2009-01-13 . chapter 16
Good story. I don't think I've read one with Tony having a stalker, which is surprising considering all the women he goes through. I enjoyed it. =)
shywr1ter
2008-10-07 . chapter 16
Nice work! I enjoyed all the touches that made this seem like an episode -- you did justice to all their unique personalities, but it especially seemed that you had Ducky's quirky self absolutely perfect!

Nice to have your story there as a carrot to get me through my work today -- work 2 hours, read a chap; work 2 hours, read a chap; work 2 hrs, bag it all & finish the story! ;}

Looking forward to reading more of your stories--
shywr1ter
2008-10-07 . chapter 2
Just found this and you have me hooked! (have to put off reading til later but can't wait!) Great, compelling start -- can't wait to see what develops...

(and why am I imagining Jardine in Kimberly's place?? I suspect I was mixing OCD with anxiety disorder in reading the first chapter! ;})
Laura-trekkie
2008-05-04 . chapter 16
Great ending. It was good to get updates on everyone who'd been injured by Kimberly and I loved that Tony visited to get his closure. I also liked the scene with all Tony's visitors and gifts- some fun and smiling for once, something that'd been a bit scarce as Kim's attentions wore on.
Laura-trekkie
2008-05-04 . chapter 15
I'm glad Gibbs got there in time. As for Kate; that was a golden opportunity for Tony to make some sort of suggestive comment. It's a shame he was too out of it.
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