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Wolf Vain
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
I love this story great job!
kag101
2007-09-15 . chapter 5
Ok, how about this. What if they come acroos a villiage where Miroku has to do his whole "Evil spirits plage the most expessive house" Routine shocking Inuyasha slightly and it turns out that they have to fight off a deamon. Inuyasha wants to try out the tessiga but it won't transform yet so he useing is iron rever soal stealer move and a new memory is added...or two. His reaction was SO cute! ^^ Hope this helps a little and i'll look forward to seeing a new chapter.
CookieCrumbleMilkSplash0331
2007-04-22 . chapter 5
this soety is really good and its almost sad t see u haven updated in about two years T-T i really want to no what is going to happen with these stories.(this and forever mine!) plz update soon or i will constantley e-mail u telling you to do so.
kristin-2
2006-06-11 . chapter 5
put some more memories in like a couple of scenes about jaken and rin and put some of his father and mother maybe a little of sessy when inu was young please update soon!
sesy sama
2006-06-04 . chapter 5
Hi I'm answering chap 5 pleads I was thinking you probably know what your going to do with Kagome's outburst but I thought of when he got all slashed up in the beginning of the fic know like in the bath tub but I could be wrong. I just keep thinking of them trying to talk about Kikyou and getting very... upset I don’t know weather it is Inuyasha or Kagome who gets upset though I thought I should tell you that. I agree I don’t think that Sessy or Kikyou should come yet either but Songo should talk to Kagome because she knows what this feels like I mean this happened to kouhaku (sorry if I spelled his name wrong) and since you killed him off before this story started she cant be quite that happy go lucky yet unless it was a long time ago since he gave his life for the shikon shard. I was wondering if you are going to connect this and forever mine at all speaking of witch you need to update it too. I really really wish I could think of more stuff to add about your story but I cant and I love your stories love love love love your stories so you need to keep writing them. Forgive me if I'm being stupid but what is aff? And if it’s another site and you’re posting there then can some one give me the site please! Sorry for making this so long but please update.
Ookami Hime Suriya
2006-04-09 . chapter 5
Hi ok mabe you could make them fight a demon, or have miroku exorsise an evil spirit or something..then they could stay there for the night like they normaly do. it would be funny having Inuyasha ask Miroku or someone about the youkai miroku didnt exorsise. and then you can put some of your own stuff in there, make it sad, or w/e and kinda funny too, or however u write.. Update as soon as possible!

ohs
light
2006-01-19 . chapter 5
a simplke situation were they are passing through a town, get hired to exterminate a demon, and inuyasha kills it would work. If he has no recolection of his memories, he would not yet bede-sensitized to blood, goor, ect. He could kill a demon with his claws, look around him and be rather shook up. it could be a " i remember how to use iron reaver soul stealer" situation or even a "learn how to use tessaiga " situation.
Elizabeth Oye
2005-10-30 . chapter 5
I don't know if you're still wanting suggestions for the next chapter or not, but in case you are...here are mine...

1) The group could seperate (gathering firewood, the girls bathing, Kagome is upset and goes off by herself to think) and Kagome is kidnapped by some demon/bandit/minion of Naraku and Inuyasha races to her rescue revealing more of the depth of his feelings for her. He could even be injured rescuing her (which wouldn't be unlikely considering his amnesia) and Kagome could freak out again. Or he could activate the Tessaiga by instinct while rescuing her and remember something else from his past (like how he got the Tessaiga in the first place and activated it while defending Kagome from his brother).

2)Kagome could (once again, like a reoccuring theme in the anime) be controlled by some demon/witch into attacking her friends and when she's supposed to attack Inuyasha refuses so strongly she hurts herself to stop her body from attacking him).

3) You could have a Miroku/Sango chapter, and either Inuyasha and Kagome can comment on Miroku and Sango's relationship (like they've done before) and Inuyasha could remember something; or at some point Inuyasha (being more communicative in his current condition) could talk to Miroku about Miroku's feelings for Sango and why he shouldn't act like a lecher.

4) The group could come to the rescue of someone/a village/a group of priests/children who are being attacked and Inuyasha could instinctively save them; or he could be losing and lose Tessaiga and change into his demon form and his friends would have to stop him (they could be injured doing so, even).

5) It could be new moon time and Inuyasha could change into his human form and have a sensitive moment with Kagome (talk about his feeling even more lost in his human state than he did before, ask if she prefers it when he's human, open up the whole half-demon insecurities bag). Or they could be attacked while he's human and Kagome could panic and save him.

I don't know if you like any of those ideas or not, but there you go.

Also I just wanted to tell you that your writing is extremely impressive and has become a horrible addiction of mine (considering I stay up till 3am sometimes just reading your work, but hey, I just can't stop). It's amazingly creative and you write the characters in such a wonderful way that they come across almost exactly the way they do in the anime, very true to their concept and spirit. It's amazing. I love your work. It's a guilty pleasure and a joy to read. Please don't stop. You are really gifted.

An Admirer Of Your Writing,
Liz
artemis
2005-05-28 . chapter 5
Well lets see I don’t have any mind blowing ideas but I think I have some pretty good ones like now that inuyasha remembered something wouldn’t kagome be expecting more which would again put a bit of a strain in the relationship. You could also have shippo make a comment on the relationship of kagome and inuyasha before he lost his memory like he could make a reference to his parents and how contradicting K/I relationship was. There’s also the possibility of a fight scene where either kagome or inuyasha are in danger and the other tries to help .I also notices there’s not much groping going on maybe miroku can get back to his lecherous ways, or you could write something from inuyasha's point of view where he thinks about possible feelings of jealousy or caring from the old inuyasha and even more finding himself sharing those feelings. Oh shoot! Look at this I rambled on there’s always lots of options even when your stuck sometimes you just need to write a chapter that’s not all that important to the plot line in order to get going again bye bye hoped it helped. Good luck!!
killer lamp
2005-03-28 . chapter 5
TOOSAI! Yes, you should have totosai(is that how you spell it?)

Two amnesia victims in one room, oh bother ^^;

Or...erm.. who else?... Myoga? (ack! it's been so long since i last read this i can't remember if he's in it yet O_O)The little thunder girl? The lady flea?, Myoga's fiance. People who'v searched him out just because they'v heard of the great inu yasha(for there undoutabley are people who'v heard of him)? Random demon searching for the shards? The little lynx who calls inu yasha brother?

Mabey you could use some of those people? Or mabey just things to trigger memorys at inconveninet times.?
no name
2005-03-27 . chapter 5
Awesome story! Very original. Now can you guess what I'll say?

UPDATE!*gets on knees* I beg of you! *cries*
BeautifulSamurai
2005-03-23 . chapter 5
I just wanted to say i absoultly love this story to bits! I mean ive been loking for another story to read for a while, and i found this one! Well i think the plot it wonderful, its deep, enterusting, and i just love how Inuyasha and Kagomes relationship is going--i think your doing a wonderful job on the whole thing! Ok so ideas for the plot m? Well i think that you should probablyhave him fight a demon next, and of course keep working on Inu and Kags relationship cause it seems to me to be a key factor in this fic(which is great!). So yeah, maybe also come up with a side plot. . .or at least start it out with him fighting a demon, it should be interusting. And than like slowly over time he could start getting flashes of his memories by just dreams, random moments. . .yeah that would be good. Um what else... well i dont know, but i guess you have to consider, do you want him just to get his memory back and continue the shard hunt, or have a side plot with the whole thing as well? Like some new threat they might have to face, or a place to go, alongside with finding the shards, and than you have the whole memory to. It would be deffinetly interusting, but i think that what ever you do it shall turn out to be a great story in end! Ok well im giong to stop rambling, youve probably heard more than you wanted to hear. . .but i guess i just really want you to continue this story and update soon. OK well keep brainstorming, i hope your feeling better, and please update soon. I cant wait!
BelleDayNight
2005-02-28 . chapter 4
I love Shippo in this...so cute. And Kouga! I have a soft spot for soft hearted jerks. I'm glad Yasha remembered and saddened that this is all there is to this fiction. I hope more ideas come to you soon. I'm thinking that perhaps Sesshoumaru should show up soon, but he'll recognize almost immediately that Inuyasha isnt himself. And with his personal code of ethics, he might even attempt to be helpful.
BelleDayNight
2005-02-28 . chapter 2
This version of Yasha is way better than the original at the moment. This is probably what he would have been like before life made him bitter and cynical.
BelleDayNight
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
This is a great start. Thanks to our mutual friend CharmedReality, I'm reading this. I don't normally read actual Inu/Kag, but if he's got amnesia perhaps he wont be haunted by his past! Yay! BTW, thanks for helping me figure out it was Sasuke from Naruto that is super cool...off to chapter two now...
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