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konnistique
2005-07-17 . chapter 11
first a YGO/YYH crossover... now a YGO/PoT one?.. *headshakes* =/
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 10
that sounded like the end, if it wasnt for those parts where you told that ryuuji will come back and ryou acting cause of revenge. My 1st idea is one anubisyami lemon*raisedhervoiceslightly* and yes destroying that demon, maybe spending time with marik, some trouble at school because something beeped in the classroom, casual things. Make something about it and them maybe Ill have some ideas for you. Till now it is interesting and it looks like it stays. Im glad you will update harem next. To answer your question, yes i enjoyed it. One more suggestion: you could put some more yami anubis part like their jobs, problems there, anubis annoying the chef(but dont make it so treatening- the next time you wont be so lucky, but just something casual that uses to annoy the chefs) and like that. So think about it and dont faint when yyou read the many reviews. Ciao. Akino
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 9
Yes I liked the way it used to be more, but hes right, times change and we change with them. But hell, make it normal! I told you what it is thats bothering me and Im sure you can take care of that, make a compromis, or what know I! Just make it normal!
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 8
Love torturing anubis. That was sweet as they saved each other. But I still hope they can explain the angel what means to remove evil from the world. It has to change it. Hope he learns that. Once more: I want AnubisYami lemon. NOW. Ah yes, how silly from me, youve already written the next chapters.*sighs* I just have to read the then, I guess.
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 6
By moonlight? Sounds interesting. It could mean anything. You have a good feeling for creating titles. I liked the ryou anubis fluff. Thats how good should be and bad react. I just hope they can change the angel. Heh, change of the angel, instead of heart, how does that sound? O.K. Im going to read your next chapter now. Like it much. Akino
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 5
I protest! Nothing was nonsense! It was perfectly good. I think there should be an apology from marik. He goes into the mansion, apologies, tells ryou how he loves him and how he let take his emotions over... but ryou should know that as an empath. and I also want anubisyami lemon. But otherwise I love it. Youre doing a great job. A.
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 4
No not twisted! That wouldnt be like that! They were the perfect couple, nothing could tear them appart, now tell me is this like their relationship should be? Now tell me, would it be right? No. On the end of the fic, they should be together. After all, rik was the person who made ryou to become the angel. Ryou wanted it because he wanted the murderers of his love dead. He wanted no evil in the world so they could be happy. Now would you seriously tear them appart? You would make me upset and screw the whole fic! Think of that. Akino
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 3
uf. Im glad its not my sexy kura-chan.hihi. And kaiba and ryou dancing... Ive allways thought ryous a good dancer. I dont know what to think about the angel. I mean he does his job, how he thinks its right and its not like he wants to harm the others but still.. he kills. That makes him evil. He shouldnt do it like that. So . Its not like I can do anything s I just have to read the next chapter. Akino
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-11 . chapter 2
Yes, this was thrilling. I just couldnt wait what comes next and wish that it would be the end of the fic, only to know, how it ends, but for now, Im satisfied. Akino
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2004-12-09 . chapter 1
Yes,Ryou fighting with himself(again). And if you dont know where that idea of cops came from, I do. See, youre as insane as me and I actually HAD that idea of making them cops. And its a very good sequel. Now again, In the northern hemisphere its 21:54 and I have to sleep. (well, according to mom I have to sleep and considering that "older people(parents) are always right.." (Hah! **!) I think I really should go. Sweet dreams. Akino
konnistique
2004-11-16 . chapter 10
wow... chapter 10 done.. you sure have been working hard... but are reviews really that essential? you seem to always ask for them... just so you know, even if you don't get reviews, doesn't mean noone reads your fics... ^^

apparently my 2 favourite yamis have been 'screwing like wild rabbits in heat..' ^_^ go them! ahaha... nice of you to include them...

finally Ryuuji and the Angel are 'together', don't they just make such a cute couple? aww..

as much as i like to make this review longer.. i'm terribly tired... must...need...sleep...
Ril
2004-11-15 . chapter 10
Yay! Two bodies means twice the fun! And more fluffyness and stuff...*pets at the couples*
Maruken
2004-11-15 . chapter 10
YAY!! I'me not sure if you've been gettig my reviews, but I just want you to know I've been reviewing for a long time now. Great idea, pairing Ryuuji with the Angel, then setting everythig back to normal, except Ryou's unusual vengence streak.
darktenshi17
2004-11-15 . chapter 10
I liked it!! Yayness that everyone can be happy! YAYNESS I say!! *sweatdrop *Sorry this a really crappy review, but I'm tirreed!
I'll be patient and wait until you've got enough ideas, but if you ask me this sounds like a pretty good ending; keaves an opening for a trilogy though.
konnistique
2004-11-10 . chapter 9
Oh my lord! guess who this is!! [no point guessing, you already know]... i'm actually reviewing Tenshi no Kokoro! ack! a few weeks ago i was still like... 'yeh, i'll read that fic sometime in near future!'... ^^;
ain't i nice??... i'm reviewing!! heehee... yup, i've taken a liking to this fic... especially the darkshipping parts... *squeal* poor Yami and Bakura... Anubis... whatever... Chamber of Nightmares... *shudders* it must be painful... *huggles them*
go Ryuuji and Angel!... XD i doubt 3-way relationships work too well... so they deserve a rightful significant other.. *cough*... yeh.. ^^
ya know?... i read the 1st 2 chapter of Identity... i don't really understand the plot too well... and Yami/Ryou SO isn't my style... *cough*style?*cough* yeh... but yeh... update TnK!! i call for more Yami/Bakura [Anubis] interactions!!...
Seto: *whacks* Ryou and I are the main pairing!!
Ryou: ^_^;
Naoko: *whacks Seto* i don't care! *huggles Yami and Bakura*
[presumably] you: O.O great...
XD... yeh well... cya?

Naoko da darkshipper... ^_^
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