Nice. Strange, but nice.

I love the fact that Megatron knows random Shakespeare quotes. The only problem I have with this is: how the frell do the Predacons know any Shakespeare at all?

...Yes, all right, I know Dinobot is obviously Hamlet, but I can consider that a function of his I'm Nobler Than Thou warrior attitude. And I know he actually goes so far as to quote a couple of the soliloquies, but still...

Quickstrike quoting Macbeth is sort of like Rattrap quoting Milton.

But very nicely written.

( Looks. )
( Blinks. )
*Quickstrike* fic? Someone is writing *Quickstrike* in a serious manner? Oh, happy day! I'll even forgive you for giving him a third mouth ( what's he need one under his mask for? He's got two others. ;) )
( Settles in to wait for the rest of the story. )

I really like this thing. It's a bit creepy, but in a good way; it keeps me wondering about what's going to happen next. I highly anticipate the next chapter. Keep up the good work! ;)

Oh, and I forgot to mention, yes, I think Quickstrike has a mouth. All TFs have mouths, it's just that half of them wear face masks. But mouths they have, and had are mouths. There. I mean, seriously! Why would TFs be designed with mouths if they weren't some how neccessary?? And if they're neccessary, you can bet they all have mouths. YEAH!!

~ckret2

Strange. Update!! I like it. It's... I'm looking for a word. Demonic? Hellish? Thrown into the medieval world of evil, vengeful wraiths, and paranoia? Plain ol' weird? I like vengeful wraiths... even though Scorponok is, by no means, a wraith. So, let's see where this goes. Update soon!

~ckret2

NO fair, you denounced my pairing before I had chance to post!

:P

And in my opinion Quickstrike doesn't have a mouth ;) :))

T'was as you said, OOC. But very nice... yes...