This is an interesting story. I liked the fact that Pegasus was still obesessed with Cynthia (a must for any pairing of Pegasus with someone other than her). Still, poor Jou.

Uh . . .interesting. All PegJou's are . . .*suddenly jumps up* I wish more people would brave those dark waters!

Faintly disturbing, yet touching at the same time. I loved their conversation, and the general mood that you created in the fic, referring to people by their looks, thus creating an almost dream-like atmosphere. Or should that be: nightmare-like? A great read.

Well.This is..different.

This was pathetic and hard-breaking and hard to read. I don't think I ever quit squirming, in fact. Because of the way Pegasus did everything just to have Cynthia back, I don't normally go for fics in which is paired with anyone else -- but this was perfect, especially given that you worked his obsession with Cynthia right in there. Nicely done.

And God, Jou... I felt so sorry for Jou... poor Jou.