Love it love it love it!

That was so amazingly beautiful and beyond perfect. As always, my hats off to you.

:O

MY. F'ING. GOD.

I thought perhaps you were dead! This is so amazingly crazy to see you back again. I can't believe it's been so long, I feel so old now :)

Reading this took me back to years ago and as soon as I started I remembered everything. Still great, still beautiful. And the song at the end, love it!

Welcome back old friend.

Have you thought of doing a Swann family tree and a Turner family tree, just for kicks?

An angry Will. Not a good thing to have, if you catch my drift.

First of all, I want to thank you for writing such an amazing story. If you wanted to, I think you could publish this.

Anyway, I haven't read a story this good in a long time, and it was a breath of fresh air for me.

I was full out crying when you wrote that Jack died. I was thinking to myself that he's Captain Jack Sparrow, and he NEVER dies! Not even in fan fiction! So to be truthful, I was a wee bit mad that you made Jack dead for a few chapters, but I loved the ending. So you're all good in my book!

Thanks again for putting your story out there!

JuicieJuice :)

FINALLY! somone that agrees withme that elizabeth's 1st kid should of been a girl! I have been looking for stories that elizabeth's kid should of been a girl, but i have only found a few.

I also love your story, "He's a pirate". Very interesting!

PS wat the heck is cyber cheese?

i love it! its so sweet!

Megs...you astound me...Does it really have to end? I mean..why end it here? end it in Singapore. End it with them turning into cheese or something. But not here. I dont want it to end.

Who will i have to bug me to review? who will i have to read their INCREADIBLE stories?

so..in other words...you better start with another one...where is it? huh huh huh

anyways. i love you..and this...this was by far...the best out of all of them. I mean..i cried when Jack died..and i cried when he came back! GHA! this is so too much!

keep writing..i dont care what you say!

lisa de Lujun

*sigh*

Thank goodness. You really did have me worried there for a while. (BTW thanks for the prozac, it helped.)

Witty Jack! I wish his plans didn't always include some type of or near death, but hey, if it works it works eh? I was crying the first half of this chapter and now that it's over...well, I'm still crying, but happy tears no less!

I too agree this has been your best work and my hat is off to you. Bravo.

Btw again, was that a Finding Neverland reference I detected?

Oh Megan, I need to wipe the tears from my eyes to see. That was a simply amazing end to a intense ride. I cried the whole time and seriously giggled when Jack appeared and then mention of the cursed chest, everything clicked into place. I honestly would have been devastated if Jack had remained dead and poor Chris, oh and her children. This makes me all warm and fuzzy inside... and thats not from the sweater I ate a little while ago. *Proudly wears her medallion* You have outdone yourself and I can only applaud you and duct tape myself to your leg *Makes duct tape sound*

Jack wears underwear?

... You do know I have tears, I just forkin' broke down and cried and... cursed. In German. Lots. Lots. That was just so gut wrenching and beautiful. *Blows nose* I'm all weepy and argh a bit loss for words. Now I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Even though I am chatting with you this very second, I have to leave a comment. *Screams like a little fangirl... girl* That is le awesome and Ah! I love the ending scene with Beckett and the matching brands, that was like a bit of a aw moment. Love it! *Huggles her precious cheese bun in the oven*... *Takes a bite*

OMG! i cried! seriously..i did..and i mean..JACK! ATHOS! I am sorry it took me so long to read them...but I knew the end was almost near and I had to review it sooner orlater. I swear you become a better writer each and every day..man i wish i was like you!

I have a feeling that Athos was going to confess his love your Ana. I just know it...i really do..but he is gone..Tear! When you wrote about the dream with jack..oh man that just made me cry even more..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MY FRIEND!

love oyu girl!

:O

That can't really have happened, can it? No! It couldn't of, I refuse to believe it. Like with Pirates 2, sure, we all seen Jack go down with the kraken, but we all know he's still alive, because Captain Jack Sparrow is indestructable...

*sigh* You have put a serious damper on my day :(