Not bad. It was pretty good.

Nice. :-)

This seemed remarkably canon, including the little short story that JKR wrote about James and Sirius. James never really did get past the hint of arrogance that he possessed. I liked it a lot.

Interesting, and the characters are the right ones (in your ways, of course), not caricaturs : really not bad !

I liked this one too. Great job. Keep writing!

Aww. That was cute. Very enjoyable.
I love pointless banter.

AWESOME !!
WONDERFUL !!
SHOULD WIN EVERY AWARD POSSIBLE!!
~CLAPS HANDS~
:)
I LOVE IT TO PIECES !!
(If it...were..paper...)
I LOVE IT !!

oh you're brilliant! i thrive on banter like fungus on...er, well; that was lovely!
yay!!

Alright... I'm horrible at prank ideas, but you're not! That was great. I really liked it. And I liked how you could see James maturing as he talked to Lily. It was great. Keep writing!

Awesome story.

that was cute

brilliant (nods with satisfaction) that about sums it up I think...keep writing you wonderful stories

Thank God,someone actually portrayed James flawed...I hate the overly romantic,perfect James...Of course I love James,but he's flawed too...And hate people potray Lily as the cold-hearted,uptight prude and James her hero...This one-shot was great...It didn't follow the the usual "Lily/ james bonding" patern that always ends with a kiss...
Anyway this one-shot was great

this was so realistic, well done, loving your stuff!

Well written. I didn't like how you made Lily abit clueless about the wizard world. Like with Quaggles and Death mingers.