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| Epiphany of Doometh 2008-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this poem; weird as it sounds, I feel emotionally attached to my Pokemon. No matter how many legendaries I knock out, I never seem to manage to restart my game because I would lose them. It annoys some people that in-game people are constantly saying that your Pokemon are your best friends, etc., but I like that element in the game. Every effort is made to make Pokemon seem real, and it works, too. Random Thought: I'm currently having an arguement with my Empoleon in my head. Somehow, that happens a lot. 0.o Yeah, I'm obsessed. |
| Damned Lolita 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThis captures my feelings perfectly. What a beautiful poem. I don't know what to say, except that this is exactly how more people should feel. Thank you for writing this! |
| sky-queen3 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseNow this is how I believe Pokemon and trainers should be. Happy and as friends, not slaves. I get sad when I hear so many Pokemon feel like slaves. (Sorry, I got a bit carried away, it happens sometimes.) Lovely story, hope to see more happy stories one day. |
| VulpixTrainer 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, i must say that recently I have noticed that some writer's have forgotten that bound that can happen, this is a very well written peice of poetry, Just Perfect. |
| MissingNo 2004-08-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is the greatest pokemon poem I ever read! |
| Dannichu 2004-08-25 ch 1, | abuseHave I ever mentioned how much I love this poem? It's so good, so heartfelt... I love it! You should write some more like this, you're really talented at poems ^^ |
| Zizzo 2004-08-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. It's very touching to me because a lot of people I know or have read the fanfiction of always end up copying the series or making that trainer magically the best without pain but much gain. I like the natural beat the poetry has...and the natural emotion of the words. I hope you can write more when inspiration strikes you, poetically and storywise. ~Zizzo |
| Random Person 2004-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat poem! It reminds me of the way I feel about my first pokemon. |
| RyukoVulpix 2004-06-30 ch 1, | abuseWoohoo! I love it! :D A lot of people really don't understand how attached you get to your Pokémon after training with them. And I think this poem sums it up pretty well. I was impressed with the rhyming. It's hard to make a rhyming poem that still sounds good rhythmically. Keep writing! |