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Epiphany of Doometh
2008-05-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really like this poem; weird as it sounds, I feel emotionally attached to my Pokemon. No matter how many legendaries I knock out, I never seem to manage to restart my game because I would lose them.

It annoys some people that in-game people are constantly saying that your Pokemon are your best friends, etc., but I like that element in the game. Every effort is made to make Pokemon seem real, and it works, too.

Random Thought: I'm currently having an arguement with my Empoleon in my head. Somehow, that happens a lot. 0.o Yeah, I'm obsessed.
Damned Lolita
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abuseThis captures my feelings perfectly. What a beautiful poem. I don't know what to say, except that this is exactly how more people should feel. Thank you for writing this!
sky-queen3
2006-08-10
ch 1,
abuseNow this is how I believe Pokemon and trainers should be. Happy and as friends, not slaves. I get sad when I hear so many Pokemon feel like slaves. (Sorry, I got a bit carried away, it happens sometimes.) Lovely story, hope to see more happy stories one day.
VulpixTrainer
2005-01-10
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, i must say that recently I have noticed that some writer's have forgotten that bound that can happen, this is a very well written peice of poetry, Just Perfect.
MissingNo
2004-08-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is the greatest pokemon poem I ever read!
Dannichu
2004-08-25
ch 1,
abuseHave I ever mentioned how much I love this poem? It's so good, so heartfelt... I love it! You should write some more like this, you're really talented at poems ^^
Zizzo
2004-08-19
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. It's very touching to me because a lot of people I know or have read the fanfiction of always end up copying the series or making that trainer magically the best without pain but much gain. I like the natural beat the poetry has...and the natural emotion of the words. I hope you can write more when inspiration strikes you, poetically and storywise.

~Zizzo
Random Person
2004-07-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat poem! It reminds me of the way I feel about my first pokemon.
RyukoVulpix
2004-06-30
ch 1,
abuseWoohoo! I love it! :D
A lot of people really don't understand how attached you get to your Pokémon after training with them. And I think this poem sums it up pretty well.
I was impressed with the rhyming. It's hard to make a rhyming poem that still sounds good rhythmically. Keep writing!
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