Awesome!

Well-written and funny and in character and L/L amd awesome.

I know this is old, but I just wanted to review to tell you that this made me laugh and it was quite good. And I am really picky about fanfiction. Especially GG fiction because it's mostly all crap, but this was very good. I thought you good into Lorelai's head well. I liked how it was mostly silly and not all overdramatic "how have I not realized that the love of my life has been right in from of me all along, blah, blah." And yeah, it was funny, good job. :)

"Lorelai let out a small, involuntary sound that some anthropologist somewhere would probably identify as the traditional mating signal of some tribe in Papua New Guinea."

HEE. ;)

aw!

I do believe this is one of the best pieces of writing that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Notice I didn't qualify it as just good fan-fic. You are quite talented. I recently discovered the dirty(!) Luke thread over at TWoP and found the link there. I must say, you ladies are dirty(!) but very funny. I am contemplating writing my own fic but after reading astounding pieces such as this I fear I am just too inept. Ah, such is life. A+ on this, seriously!

That was just, , , well DAMN GOOD!! Thank you.

Hee. ::bites lip:: Heeheeheehehehe. ::dissolves::

Oh, I love this... the whole 'are we dating?' - question in the last episode is just hilarious, how Lorelai is so clumsy and Luke who seems to be very selfconfident and stuff... wonderfull :)

this is really old but its really good, loved the viggo mortensen reference. it was awesome

Do you know the last time I laughed out loud at a FanFiction? Never. At least, I think never. But that's besides the point. This is seriously the best One-Shot I've ever read. It's the best FanFiction I've ever read! It's so awesome!

What she really needed was to talk to Rory—oh, wait. She'd already done that. But Rory had been all, 'when you're with Luke, you are with Luke,' and basically let her know that dating Luke would rip a hole in the fabric of the space-time continuum, and had been absolutely no help. Stupid useless Ivy League education.

Love it, love it, love it! I love all the references to stuff. Like Brady Bunch and Whoopi and Michael Jackson 'n' shtuff.

Oh my god! I love this so much! This is right on Lorelai thinking. You really know your GG characters. Yea!

Thank you! I knew there was something about season 1 Luke which made him more sexy, but I couldn't put my finger on it! ( Dirty!) Loved the story!

Ahh, so good! The whole stream of consciousness thing really works for you and it definately captures Lorelai perfectly. This was SOO good!

Ay caramba. I would say you can *seriously* write Lorelai well - but that's such an understatement I think it might just be an insult, so there ya go.

Ya know, writing more on this one wouldn't entirely bad...or, ya know...bad at all...

I just discovered this fic. I really loved it! It made me laugh, and it was just delightful to read.

Great, well-written, funny story. I loved the line "Forget waltzing. Wait till Rory found out that Luke can kiss." Ah, who am I kidding, I loved it all.