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| Petunia846 2006-07-25 ch 1,  | abuseThat was a lovely piece. Very nice. |
| chezlovesyou 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abusehow touching. great job giving a complete insight into Michelle and how she fits into CTU and Tony! I love the opening line: Sometimes Tony looks at his wife and feels nauseous with how much he loves her, with how much he would sacrifice for her and with how tempted he sometimes is to grab her wrist and take her into the sunlight. It perfectly illustrates their lives and the choices they have made, as well as what kind of people they are! Great Work! |
| mirel 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abusei love this story, i know it´s old but i just read it and it´s so great :D |
| Heather McFey 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI always try to write a constructive review, with something to improve on. But this was so fantastic I don't think I would change anything. It was just so perfect. It was not fluffy fluff, but it still made me feel all goosebumpy. I could gush about this story for hours. Really amazing. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
| Xandra73 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this one. Very nice idea to center the story around Michelle's drive to the hospital. And how they are both so in love with each other. *sigh* |
| ILuvCarbyFuzz 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abusegreat story!! i loved it!! |
| dealan 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseAnother great fic. I am going to have to start pimping out your fic soon. I like the contrast and it flows very nicely. The one thing I would say is add a divider line between the POVs so it's a little easier to see the switch, but otherwise, it's great. |