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2008-04-19 . chapter 6 LOVED IT! |
Spot's goil
2006-07-04 . chapter 6 this story is some what touching but it could have been better.
why the crap do you people like making spot into a bad guy!? he's hot , and so not abusive,a raper,or any of the things you protrais him as! don't be a hater just because he's my man and not yours.
if you got a problem with what i just said send me an email.
SPOT'S GOIL 4EVER! BROOKLYN'S leaders goil! p.s. don't be a hater |
 kaitins
2005-07-17 . chapter 6arggh, spots driving me crazy! in "two hours" spot seemed so kind to his new bride...but now... arggh. i hope he opens his eyes pretty soon and see what he's become.
anyway, great fic so far, please keep updating. |
 FlamingYingYang
2005-06-21 . chapter 6Spot is so mean. How can he live with himself. At least Sippi is nice so the kids hyave a kind man around. I want to find out more. Were was Spot? who exactly are Sammy and Sally? You have to update. Hawk |
 Raelin Brianna
2004-09-20 . chapter 1I love it so far Rae but i'm gonna have to finish it another day but i promise i will hope all is well ~angelstar Kelly (from the nml) |
 Southern Spell
2004-09-19 . chapter 6Well! Spot isn't a very nice person, but at least Sippi is. Keep writing. |
Petals
2004-09-17 . chapter 6o Spot needs to be slapped
*~Petals~ |
 NadaZimri
2004-08-30 . chapter 5Twas a great chapter as always Rae :). LoL, that was pretty slick how ya inserted Tug and Raven into the story there *winks*. Oh...not sure if ya know or not, but the link at the bottom of the chapter didn't show up. You might wanna try referring people to your profile and just putting it in there.
~NadaZimri~ |
Petals
2004-08-28 . chapter 5Go 'Sippi! yeah soak Spot (even though he's already hurt but c'est la vie)
*Petals~* |
CiCi
2004-08-28 . chapter 5 So what are you gonna name the boy? Personally I like Dallas Micheal but thats just me. I also like Andrew. Well I hope you get the next chapter up as fast as you did this one! Luvs and Hugs CiCi |
TheAngryPrincess13
2004-08-28 . chapter 5Great chapters..Poor Girl... |
CiCi
2004-08-27 . chapter 4 *frowns* When Spot gonna be in the picture? I wanna see his reaction to all this...I wonder what shes gonna name the boy. Great chapter! Luvs and Hugs CiCi |
TheAngryPrincess13
2004-07-14 . chapter 3Aww...How Sad! Poor Lily...ugh..I had a dream like that 2...except I was with Spot AND Mush..lol...But Im 14 yrsold my bday was July 3rd..but Update soon..this stories getting good! |
Angelfish7
2004-07-10 . chapter 3Oh man, this one really got to me. She is so young, but great plotline..will Spot come back and learn to love her? Oh, i want more! Keep writing, i cant wait.
~angelfish |
Southern Spell
2004-07-10 . chapter 3Aw...so sad. Poor Lily. Bad Spot. Good job writing this Rae. |
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