/gives love to Snailgirl

I like Moroi, she's cute! Hmm.. on to the next chapter

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That was BRILLIANT!
Beautiful work!
Thankyou!

*gives her love to the Snailgirl*

Like I said before. BRILLIANT. Absolutely BRILLIANT. I wish I were at least HALF as talented as you are. GREAT job...WONDERFUL. This totally should be SH5 ;.;

Only thing, though...I think that there should be a bit more background info on Harakiri. I know that she is the "sadistic" part of Moroi, but maybe if you made more references to her throughout the fic, she wouldn't seem like "just another delusion" which is somewhat the impression that I got.

Other than that...GREAT JOB

*worships*

That was... incredible. God I love you. I had no idea what I was getting into when I started this story. And thats what made it such a mind whirl. I liked Moroi from the start you know, one mention of the snail and I was hooked. THANK YOU for this reading experiance, the world needs more writers like you...

Its like... you are sucked in... I couldn't of stopped reading it if I had wanted to. I was inside her world. I can't think of anything that could of been done better. Natural talent just makes the critcism float away. Maybe alittle later, after this story's spell has worn off, I'll think of somthing. Until then, I love you. Thy has birthed a true work of art.

It was a good read I rilly think you captured the essence of the game well.
Once I started I stop till i ha read all the chapters it was very engrosing.
Your character seamed more then just a name you rilly brought her to life.

This is another fic I've been following for quite a while (since it was only four chapters long), and once again, I'm long overdue to submit my thoughts. This story is also nothing short of excellent. Moroi is a lovable character with a very interesting outlook on the things around her. Case in point, after the encounter with Torpor: her own little path of snail-slime. Delightful!

Stanley was faithfully represented, especially in chapter one, when he almost went flying off the handle while talking about Heather. Although, Stanley's representation isn't quite so sympathetic in one of the puzzles when playing through SH3 with riddle difficulty set to hard (see the Song of the Linnet and the body it was found on).

The monster designs are another place where this fic stands out. Disturbing and totally twisted. Perfect for Silent Hill. Those guys at Konami should learn from you. The nod to the Game Show from SH2 was creative, and rather funny in a that's-so-wrong kind of way.

The only bad thing is that I found the end to be somewhat anticlimactic.

...Okay, I lied. It's not anticlimactic. I'm just disappointed because it's over. I wanted to see more of her adventure, but, oh well... But I'm really glad she didn't fire off that last round.

Overall, I'd say this story has more than earned the four stars I award it. Well done, author.

What an amazing way to end an amazing fic. This is the kind of story that makes me go "**, I'll never come up with something as good as this!" Poor Stanley - his heroine finally came to "rescue" him, but then it was too late ... In the game, he just freaks the player out with those diaries popping up everywhere, but in this story, you kinda showed him in a different light (not just as the "creepy stalker"). Good to know that the Snailgirl got out, too ... Well, I'll stop rambling now. Congrats on finishing this very unusual, awesome fic.

Wow. I'm at a loss for words.
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This story was excellent. It wasn't perfect, but no one is. I only had nitpicky problems with it anyway. Some spelling/grammar issues, and a chapter eight which really had nothing to do with the overall story. I mean it's nice to reference other stories and characters, but it didn't feel right to just introduce him and then let him be on his way. Either do something with him or don't include him, y'know? It was a nice nod to Wrath's story though, I can say that.
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And then the great ending. It's something that might get people saying, 'she went through it all just for that?' but really, I like a subtle ending like that better than the 'end the story with a bang' type finishes. And I don't even need to express how morbid the atmosphere is, which is probably the best described surroundings in an SH fic I've ever read. I enjoyed this, a lot, and it's a shame I almost let this one pass me over.

*applaudes*
i really like the way you flipped from one emotional extream to another in this chapter. the suicadal section of this was damn intense and over all, it was a good ending.
sigh, i'm going to miss Moroi and her phycotic take on silent hill...

Whoa. This is incredibly trippy and depressing to read, and judging by the lack of reviews, one of the most underrated/overlooked SH fics around here. I loved the way you gave the torpor condition a physical form and let it chase Moroi. Giving SH a touch of Japanese, having Jobe on as a guest star, the description of Harakiri ... wonderful ideas. Update immediately ... and btw, I'm totally in love with Moroi. Kudos for creating such an unusual main character.

wow...
you're descriptions/creature designs really are something else, you manage to do something with them that makes them so disturbing and its amazing how...gritty you manage to make everything feel. this has to be one of my favorite SH stories around here, more people shoud definaltly be reading this.

the way you presented the flash-backs were fantasticaly creepy and the narrator kinda reminded me of the game-show host for SH2.
I can tell why you wanted to write that chapter.
btw, nice quotation from 'you're not here', i don't know why more people arn't reading this...

good work, it was exctremaly interesting to read that sceen from Moroi's pov and i am honored you aggreed to incoperate it into your story.

ah, yes, i'm an avid fan of hello captain's works but sadly, she seemes to have abaanododned her other silent hill works *moans forlornly*
*reads note at end*- another OC? oh who could that be!
I really love moroi's innocent outlook on the madnes around her, and i can't think of that many people who'd risk their live's over a scarecrow...
Nice chase scene aswell, you break up this story so well.
Now, i'll just keep quiet about my privet insight into the next chapter *winks*