WOOT! What a long read! I had fun though, heh heh, in a way Zim and Dib found some common ground and possibly Dib started to respect the Irken after the whole "dream" fiasco.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Wow! I LOVE this story! (to story) I lo-hu-hu-ve yo-ho-ho-ou! (to author) I could hug it! It was AWESOME! I'm glad it wasn't romance. Especially SLASH (shudder). Too many people write the DAMNED slash... (remembers you said your story would be ZaDr) I don't like it, but I'll admit to reading about it sometimes. I should check out your OTHER stories! Chao!

LOVE IT! Very good fic. I love ZADF, there isn't enough of it around.

Excellent. Very in-character and yet heart-wrenchingly cute! I especially liked Dib's delusional dream about the virus and such.

It was a great fic, but... eh... The ending seems way too rushed to me.

Hello! My name is Goat (or you know, my alter ego or whatever), and while I don't have an account here I DO wander through the Zim fanfics quite often. I just so happened to stumble across your story here.

I adored it. Even though I usually stick to mainly ZADR fics (because... uh... well, I just do XD ), I was more fond of this tale than a lot of the other fics I have read. For the most part, everyone was on-character, save the scenes containing momentary ZIM kindness (which are NEVER bad things, by the way) and still the scenes were about as close as one could get, given the character.

The "dream" at the end was very convincing; I experienced about the same reaction as Zim did, then breathing a sigh of relief when Dib woke up. Though it did seem to end a bit too abruptly for my tastes after that. But it was a happy ending, and that made me happy too ^_^

Uh... sorry if this didn't really have critique or anything like that. This is my first time actually reviewing a story, and seeing as I read this last night, I can't recall much of any particular problems I had with it. So yes. I enjoyed it very much. And that's pretty much all I really had to say XD

Oh so amazing, awesome story. I didn't like how you made the whole dramatic part a dream, but you redeamed yourself with the closing conversation, made me squeel. Just the simple thank you, yay! Te he, you have taken up nearly 3 days of free time in reading this, in between school and such. Great story, I loved it and can't wait to read more!

So good! :P Love that Dib and ZIM

-Crizzy-

JUST noticed.

Ebil Kow: Thanks for not making it a ZADR, and sorry if I sounded mean before, I just don't like those much. ^^;

THEN she gets flamed at. Way to go, flaming a person AFTER they apologize. Psh.

Also: I guess you're right about the dream thing Feimi, we might never know for sure until someone wakes from the dead that is.

WTF? Pinky-pseudonym what you said to Ebil Kow was low. They explained at the end of their review that it was the author's right to do what they want with their story, and the reader's choice to stop reading something if they don't like the sexuality of it. You don't need to be mean and spiteful about it with the "OMG TEHY SHUD MAK IT A LEMON TO PIZZ TEHM OFF!" BS. That's just stupid and childish. You may not think ZADR is disgusting, but they do, and you need to realize it is their right to dislike it as it is your right to like it. You were completely in the wrong to say that ZADR isn't disgusting and if they think it is then they are retarded. That's YOUR opinion. This is like the 100th time I've seen you attack someone for no reason in particular. Please, stop acting the fool and just let other people have their opinion.

As far as this story, I just finished it and I thought it was very well written. Nice job Feimi.

~Kitsy

Holy crap o_o
I luff this story to bacon bitses. I shall now fav this and you. I saw that you also wrote a Red/Purple fic. I can't remember if I reviewed it or not. If I havn't, it will be soon ^_^

This is great. As for the whole dying-in-your-sleep-making-you-die-in-real-life thing, it's a load of crap.
I remember lots of dreams where I got killed. Usually very slowly and painfully.
And I hope it's obvious that I'm still around xP

Gah, I'm not very far into this yet, but it is very good! Pat on the back to you. I can't believe I didn't read it earlier -.- Now I must finish this...*goes to work*

~Kitsy

Oh! Shocking ending, but what a really good story. Also about that die in a dream, you die in real life...that's a bunch of crap. I have died in my dreams lot's of times (well, at least I think I did).

Then I must've died several times by now if that's true.

Yey! I really enjoyed reading that. This is probably one of the best ZADFs I read to. Thanks for sticking through the story.

Haha ending on chapter 13 lovely, oh yes. Well I hope your break from writing isn't too long.

Woah, now that was a surprising ending...

Great job!