the fist chapter is great! pls. continue. i'll be waiting! :)

Nice one! bitin ulit! hehehe...^__^;; you really love to write 'future fics' hey? you're good at it anyway...^_^ oh and i love the poems! ang lalim... astig tlga! ok, i must admit, i'm not a fan of NeonxKurapika, nor do i hate it, it's just...ok.*shrugs* BUT i really like your story! ^__^

ja ne!! hope to hear from you soon...^_~

ei... i think this fic is really well-written. I'm starting to love KxN fics and I personally think it's a ptiy that i was able to read your fic just now. Wish i couldv'e read this one earlier. Um, why don't you try writing a KxN sequel fic? I think you'll do well as much as you did in this one.. :)

um...where do i begin. It starts good although there was some mistakes, but the end had a lot of grammatical mistakes. you mike want to review this. other than that, it's pretty good.