|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Bite of No Mortibus|
| monbade 8/22/10 . chapter 11
good story, waiting on more
| Guias 7/18/09 . chapter 1
Please finish the story...
| Falke-ness 12/30/08 . chapter 11
This is such a great story, a shame it hasn't been updated in so long. I just wanted to say that what I've read of this work has been amazing. It's kept me at the edge of my seat on several occasions and think I've run through an entire box of tissues on certain chapters. Great work.
| missxsh0rtie 5/23/06 . chapter 11
OMG! i know you havent updated since last year but i really really want to know what happens to hermione, harry, and dumbledore! :-) please update as soon as you possibly can because im goin crazy here since i dont know what happens! lol! :-) i hate cliffes lol! :-) well newho update soon! please...
| doesntmatter2u 10/12/05 . chapter 11
love love love ur story! great one! kip it up! pls update soon! i hate cliffhangers:( can't wait!
| infiniteternity 9/26/05 . chapter 11
It's a shame really that such a story of beauty and alluring mysteriousness doesn't get the get the much dercerve aclaim that lesser authors recieve! I love this story and please don't be disheartened by the lack of voice on our readers part.
I guess its because we're too busy hiding in the shadows of "supposed denial" (pssh, just cause we like h/hr...who gives I read any pairing anyway) and running away from taunting bad-asses and others to actually sit down and write out a couple of words of appriciation! Thank you so much for your dedication and delicate writing skills. Please do continue
| ms dumplings 4/25/05 . chapter 11
POST POST POST IT"S TERRIFIC!
| Trowa no Miko 4/24/05 . chapter 11
I’m flattered you stay on ffn for my reviews. I try hard to respond with something meaningful instead of just “Great job!” I hate those reviews. Anyway, the name still sounds familiar. Oh well. Aw… I love Shakespeare! That’s an interesting idea. I like how you added Snape’s mentioning the sleeping draught from the first book. So basically, Hermione needed to be thawed? Wouldn’t her heart being stopped for so long cause brain damage as well? Wands act as a catalyst to concentrate magic at a specific destination and make it stronger… That reminds me of Fullmetal Alchemist and how Ed’s searching for the Philosopher’s Stone to use as a catalyst to make his alchemy stronger.
I’m still waiting for Harry to break down. He’s a time bomb. Dumbledore could very easily get hurt by toying with Harry like that. Just get straight to the point and be blunt. The questions and answers banter is a bit tedious. I like the explanation of why Harry doesn’t feel Voldemort anymore, though. Really now, I can’t see Dumbledore ever sacrificing a student like that. He wouldn’t have a student spy. Hehehe… I like this line: “Death Eaters like to play with their toys… …they like to break their toys.” It reminds me of a line in Yu Yu Hakusho and I love the imagery as well. Imagine Lestrange playing with a Hermione doll. . Ack! Another cliffhanger! You’re amazing at those. It’s really starting to get exciting. Write the next chapter soon!
PS: If you’re looking for another beta, I’d be more than happy to help.
| Girl number 1 4/24/05 . chapter 11
Wow I'm liking this whole color of magic stuff. Cant wait till you're next update!
GIRL NUMBER 1
| JTBJAB 4/22/05 . chapter 11
There is only one thing i can say about this... IT IS BRILLIANT! ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Trowa no Miko 4/12/05 . chapter 10
Busy busy, only just got to sit down and r&r. Ginny’s/your remark about girls needing other girls is so true. I like Mark. He’s a sweety, like a little brother and it’s cute how you’ve had him observe Harry and his relationships. And so intuitive—though it sounds like he’s just repeating what Ginny’s saying. Rebecca Larson… Where do I know what name from? That’s going to drive me crazy until either you respond or I remember. ;squee; Now here’s why I love reading your fics so much! All the wonderful angst. Hurrah for pain and suffering! I do not deny my weirdness. Couldn’t Pomfrey just use petrificus totalus (sp?) to freeze Harry? I almost wrote riggor mortis. XD I see. Guess you couldn’t use the spell if you need to give him potions and let his body do what it needs to do after the curse… Ack! Evil cliff-hanger. You’re so good at those. Anyway, can’t wait for the next chapter. Beautiful job as always. I look forward to your fics more than her books.
| Lady Darkshine 2/5/05 . chapter 9
Great so far! Very few grammer mistakes and you write surprisingly like JK Rowling herself, in some parts. You use some words that she herself might use.
I'm wondering what's going on with Ron. Does he think that it was Harry's fault Hermione 'died'? Maybe he's upset that Harry isn't entirely put-out by Hermione's 'death' as he should be (being that he knows she's not really gone). And if Harry had to convince Ron that he could hear Hermione in his head, how the heck could he do that?
Update soon, I've got to know!
| Trowa no Miko 2/4/05 . chapter 9
;giggles; "Percy-esque"... I could so see Ron acting like that. God! I'd so smack Ron after treating Harry like that. Poor Harry, his robes are too small and his muggle clothes are too large. Like Goldie Locks! XD Whoo... You made my heart stop. I though Harry wouldn't be Seeker just 'cause Ron's acting like a prick. I liked this chapter, not much happened, but it's leading to stuff. Finish the next chapter soon! I gotta find out what's wrong with Ron.
| Fear My Butterfly Army 1/30/05 . chapter 9
I was wondering if you could make your chapters a little longer and try to stick the plot. It is really of track right now. Other than that it is a resonably good story. Keep it up.
| Voakands 1/20/05 . chapter 8
A very good plot so far! Hopefully Hermione can keep up her illusion for a while longer and Harry better start doing some detective work!
Will Professor Larvae become an essential person in Hermione's rescue? And since Harry already knows this DADA stuff, what's he going to do? Hoping for you to update soon!