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| The Mist X 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abusewow thi spoem obviusly shows how ones run from and epihmy of there frer via death a parent or rejction the ar efutile to escpe it and must just acept it allowing "there wounds to heal) yuo are awesome in evry way shape in form god bless or what ver you worship(yoiurself would be a vibel option [no that wanst ajoke its actually a legal religion now] |
| MadeUpFigment 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThis story flows very nicely and I admire the ryming. I like the idea even if it's weird (then again weird ideas are somtimes the best). I don't have much to say right now |
| Lord Karkon 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseSorry if I sound too critical, but some of the rhymes seem too... forced. I can't explain it, but it's a feeling that I often get when hearing a poem... that it didn't need to be a poem. The feeling that the poet (or poetress?) is trying too hard to make the poem rhyme kind of gets in the way... but maybe that's me. From the other reviews, I bet I sound like an overly critical snob... but I'm not! Now if you'll excuse me, it is exactly 11:23:54, which is tea-time. Cheers, old Chap! [/sarcasm] |
| WildCroconaw 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThat's a great poem. After reading this poem, I relized how natural it seemed to have dark types die if they face the sun |
| Black UTAHRAPTOR 2004-11-13 ch 1, | abuseA great Houndoom poem. They wouldn't die in sunlight, but still, a very interesting poem fic. |
| MissingNo 2004-10-22 ch 1, | abuseA great poem! Good job, Dragonfree! |
| nightdragon0 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting take on it and it's a pretty nice poem too! |