Awesome. This is the best Lf2 story out there! Good job!

Kinda interesting... though I wonder when Bat, Jack and Mark will make appearence...

And does Louis have the ability to change into LouisEX? Just wondering... Keep it up!

I felt this chapter was a bit short, but it explains a lot. Not that I wanted to know anything more since I was hoping to know whatever happened to Dennis this chapter. Oh well, good chapter anyway, looking forward for the next one. Those 7 names with Firzen should a bit familiar.

this story is awesome please update it

Hey, good story. I like how you write, it's not in the usual way a lot of people write it in...hmm, I can't seem to describe it. Oh well, maybe it's like you said, the adverbs, but you write in such an interesting way I should read all your stories.

Dennis is obsessive, but I don't see what's so bad in being driven away in the bus, it's not like the driver is evil or anything...

Or is he?

Update, or maybe not, I'm not sure if you discontinued this or not.

Geez! Hurry it up

Hurry up and make post more please!

I gotta hear more

Too cool. its awesome. You are really good

woah! cool! u finally updated chap 5! I never thout u would!

this story is super cool!why are you not updating?

Don't get the last paragraph of the last chapter, but story is good throughout.. :p

I love this story...which I probably said about 6 times while reading this.

And even though I'm not too fond of Davis, I like the personalities...

A lot.

Update?

super duper dude!please hurry and update!

pretty good

is there any chemistry between jan and davis?

i couldn't tell lol

plz update

woohoo! this story is so funny! i love it. you have a natural abilty to write humour and tp write. who are those three people - vollcan, greeny and somebody else that appear in chapter three? pleae tell me! also, update this soon! this is do good, i love it.