*crying* thats sooo sad.

*SOBS* that was SO sad! noooo! why'd they both have to die?! *sniffle* good ficcy, write more!

Awww sad ficcy!!! WHY DID MARRON HAVE TO DIE?!

Wish Marron and Trunks and back with the Dragonballs and make Goten and Bra have a divorce so Marron can be with Goten and Pan can have Trunks. I know it's a stupid idea, but anyaways I liked this, it was so sad=(

why do you people always have to write such sad story?

Good story, sad ending. Sorry not to much else is coming to my head right now. Keep up the great work.

well, that was sad, i'm crying practically, if you were goin for a t/m fic, well that best summed up the best love story i heard. who knew love was painful. oh ineed to stop crying. its so sad, but sweet all combined in one for the love of everyone and all the pain, woooh ok i'm getting too dramatic, but that was good, even though it was sad, but it was still good, keep up the good work.

Wahhhhhhh!! Poor Marron! I miss her already! Oh, wait it's just a fic...Okay, well, I'm sorry for 18 and Krillen, but I feel bad that Marron was alone, couldn't you have put her with Uub? I felt that the T/P was being threatened for a second. But it does seem just like Marron to do something like that...sometimes us authors don't give her enough credit. Your grammer needs a little work.

NO!Marron can't die but it's your fic.

Wow, this was excellent! You really described their feelings!

the plot is OK so far, but you could use some help with your grammar.
Some of the story was very hard to read because it didn't make much
sense.

this is tha most lovely story i ever read .
congratulations.

*sniff* That was so sad!! I'm one of the many Trunks lovers but I think I handled this pretty well. Ohhh... I think I'm about to cry again!! It was well written and just...*bawling* so sad!!1

I didn't get the last part, but the rest was great, so saD, C-18 and Krillin losing thier ony child.Thinks "How sad." turns away and cry to her self.

*wripes the tears away* It is great, I love it, just love it.
One bad part, when Trunks *sigh* dead.* starts cring again, looks away from the people.*