That... was magnificent. It was short and thoughtful, emotional, and overall very well written. There were barely any spelling mistakes; in fact, I saw none, so unless I glazed over it then it was near perfect. It was new spin on the Pokemon universe, and I liked that originality about it. The examples of pokemon made it seem more realistic to canon. I also like how you imagined Magikarp to have been a once-powerful pokemon, I didn't see that coming. Also, as a side-note, I'm glad there was no author's note at the end to ruin the mood you set. I find they usually ruin a very good piece.

-ML

It's great and it really describes Ash's situation.

Not bad, but remember, not ALL humans care only about themselves! Take me for example. I'm sick and tired of Humans making asses of themselves by screwing up the world. I want to make a difference.
This reminds me of my original fiction essay: 'Mankind's Shame.' You can read it at http:/w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid1404886
But please, don't review if you don't like it. I've gotten too many negative reviews so far.
Finally, I'd just like to say: great job.
Gijinka Renamon

SD: Wow! You gave great explanation of how and why thing are today. This is great, and amazing.

I liked this chapter alot. Mew is one of my favorite pokemon!

This is really cool. Are Ash, Misty and whoever going to find out about this in the next chapter?

I never reviewed this. I guess I'll do it now. Sorry! Very good!

Wow that's a mighty interesting side story of how humans use to evolve into Mews. its really really good and really really interesting theroy.

Dammit Dragoness, you always have an answer to everything! Believe me I LIKE to be in suspense...

I love it still, the FONT for rying out loud even goes with the story. I really like it!

i liked this very much ) and this is coming from somebody who isn't even a pokemon fan _ hooray for Dragoness!

Good story Jo...ah dragoness. I was surprised. It was very creative. I'll have to check out the other stories

I like it...it's weird, and is easy to fit into another story, always a plus. _ Very good, Dragoness. I'm already a fan.

ah. now I understand...hum...so that is why Ash is evoling...hmmm...but he doesn't want to...where does that play in?

cool

ill be reading the others... i think i read it already but n e who... it good :

This seems more like a prolouge than anything.