So passionate, So raw, so..Shikhee..

=O What a go on?!

Outstandingly written. I love what you did here. Every fragment, every sentence, and every paragraph flowed through nicely. This story was great and it was an interesting read.

I can't wait for the epilougue.

You write wonderfully. Moreoverly, beautiful.

^_^

The wealth of rich detail you present is awe-inspiring. It makes every line of dialogue that much more powerful. I know this was done for the LJ challenge (and am I ever glad for that if this is the result!), but are you going to do any more chapters? This feels like there's more to it, but I can also understand if you stop at two chapters as it is a challenge response. Still, I want to read more of this; I want to read so much more. I feel like there's so much more there waiting to be read.

Wow.

Just. Wow.

The intensity of this fic burned holes in my eyes as I read. The climax knocked my breath away.

You *really* have a way writing emotions. Whoa.

I dread the epi, but want to read it anyway. We know the end. It isn't pretty.

Wow that was intense. But I liked it. It was very very good. Well I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I really want to know what is going to happen.

Wow. This chapter was, well, extraordinary. You have this awesome ability to describe a scene... I can almost feel what's going on. And I really like the direction you've taken with Spike. His feelings seem true to character. I can't wait for more.

This is absolutely amazing. The imagery, the emotion, everything is perfect. Absoutely perfect. Definately one of the best stories to be posted on this site.

Broken Heart was a story beautifully written. I await the epilogue! :))

Wow, awesome update! ^^ First of all, I'd like to point out that you did a wonderful job with describing how Spike felt about Julia's loss. I feel this way since I, too, felt like I lost a love, and wherever I was I felt as if I could hear his voice, or that I saw him, but, on closer inspection, it was just someone else and he was nowhere to be found. I felt as if I could relate, so that was great. ^_^ Secondly, whenever he cried, that was NOT OOC to me at all since, if you listen closely to the commercial for Ballad of Fallen Angels, he recites the words 'like the peeling of an onion', which I interpret to mean that he cries/mourns over Julia since he's comparing it to when people peel onions, and we all know that people cry whenever they do that. And as for Spike/Faye's interaction, I can DEFINITELY see them doing that. After all, they both have been without love for so long, that they'd either actually come to love one another, or they'd expel some pent-up sexual frustration. I REALLY liked the image of Spike's eyes being the only thing that Faye could see through the shroud of smoke; that was really cool. And it was VERY cruel of you to cut it off like that! >.< LoL Are you British? I noticed that you spelled behavior with a "u", & I wuz like...ooh, cool! ^^ LoL I like Europeans...they're nice. =P And no, I'm NOT sucking up...I've been to England & they ARE nice! LoL Oh, I LOVE this story! ::cries cuz it's so good:: REVIEW, DAMN YOU! WHY WON'T ANYBODY ELSE REVIEW?! Well...they did, but...still, you deserve SO much more. And, in actuality, I find that this fic is more romance/angst than general/angst, & I seriously think that it would be in your best interest to change your genre to that since most people looks under romance to find a good SxF fic to read. So, in result, you'll get more reviews! =D LOVE THIS LOVE THIS LOVE THIS LOVE THIS! AH! =P I'm sad, though, cuz what if you update while I go to Bermuda this week?! I'll be gone til Tuesday, so what if you update without me?! ::cries:: LoL Sorry...I've taken up MORE than enough of your time, heh. -.-' Update asap...AWESOME! ^,~

"To have a mortal love a goddess--well, that was just brazen arrogance on the mortal's part. But for the goddess to love him in return? It was as if Providence had opened up and bestowed Spike with the fairer embodiment of the Golden Fleece of myth."

LOVE THAT!! You're an extraordinary writer. "Broken Heart" shows promise.

I really like what you've got so far. The narritive is so smooth and the imagery paints detailed emotional pictures. I especially liked the amputation analogy Spike related to Julia. It got the point accross so much better than other fic's usual 'One true love, angel, gotta find her' excuses.
Keep up the lovely work!

aiya!. I was just blushing and smiling through the whole of this. Damn man good good writing. I will not wait! hurry up and update man!

Wow, you're a VERY good author. ^^ You have a great vocabulary, which is wonderfully refreshing due to the fact that most of us on here are amateurs, even though we do generally have very good ideas. I like your description and how everything flows so smoothly...you make it seem like second nature. ^_^ I guess, in a way, that it is. After all, I always go to my writing like a second life, and, judging by the way you write, you do, too. ^-~ I look forward to the future installments and good 'ol SpikexFayeness. Update ASAP! ^,~

A stunning peice! It's very well written and characterized. I can't wait to read more.