I'm assuming this is Relena's POV... I'm probably wrong, since I haven't seen the actual series in over a year. It's a really good story, but try to vary your rhythm a bit. Your paragraphs all have almost the same rhythm.

The most beautiful thing I have ever read.

im confused...:S
who is this fanfic supposed to be about? Its very well written, and it makes you think...but its hard to figure out who its about...:S