Wow! I think I have the same imagination as you then. I also imagine that Goku and Chichi had a daughter, except in my version the daughter was Gohan's Twins Sister! Lols, I loved that story, got me thinking about the imaginations that I use to have when I watched DBZ

interesting. please update soon.

You GO Trunks!

cool Zoten wear dress! kiss kiss

hahahahahahaha Zoten you are so cornered! what did she think he wouldn't do it?

cool awesome love it
kissy face how cute

awesome chapter!evil cliffy!

aw. their cute together. though they're not the only ones. goten and Sinka also make a cute couple. nice story. update soon.

Aw, Zoten and Trunks are falling in love... It's FUN! ^_^

Good luck with writing!

The ending was good for this chapter! Cant wait to see what happens next! Bye! :)

sounds interesting, keep it up.

*am i the only one who finds Sinka scary? ^_^'*

aw. they're so cute. sounds good, please update soon.

And so the training has begun. Wonder who that mysterious woman is. I liked your chapter.

Wow Good story so far! I hope you update soon because it looks like this story is getting really good! Bye! :)

the story line is applaudable, but the grammar, spelling, usage, and mechanics are repellent! If you used the correct tenses and grammar, it would be great, but right now it's just confusing and awful. You should take it down, and go over it again. There is no excuse, except laziness, for it to be like this. I'm sorry if I seem harsh, but that's the way I see it. If the grammar is better though, I will definitely read it!